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Scroff wrote: ↑

Tue Dec 25, 2018 5:43 am

All I Want for Christmas

That was fantastic, thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed writing it.

I'll come back on and comment on everyone else's properly soon, just wanted to respond to my Santa whilst I had a few minutes.

You absolute madman, that was glorious. Had some initial doubts as to why the director's daughter would choose to play Hanako if she was looking for a boyfriend, but you explained it all in the end. Wonder what happened to her though. Assuming some kind of major therapy.

Here's my little contribution to this excellent annual event. Many thanks again to ProfAllister for organising it for us all. My victim is Path with the below prompt. I was tempted to go full yaoi on it but refrained in the end. Mutou and Nurse leave the Yamaku Holiday Staff Party to have a party o...

Not at all what I expected but I like it so far. Curious to see where you're going with it.

That was cute. I liked the characterisation of young Shizune, could definitely see her being like that at that age.

Yeah it was a new word for me too, was going to go with Audio Voyeurism but a quick Google later found there was an actual term for it. Glad you enjoyed it!

Glad you guys liked the poetry, here's some more smut. Apologies for any weird formatting, just moved house so posting from mobile. Ecouteurism (NSFW) [/size] "I think I'm going to have to call it a night. " Hanako's cup clinks lightly against the saucer as she pushes it away from her. "Yeah, same ...

Cup and Saucer was sweet - I have to say I'm developing a soft spot for Rika fics lately. Shame it never got finished though. The Night Doctor on the other hand I feel was a disjointed mess of memeing and oddness. The writing itself was fine and with a bit of editing to give it some coherency and fl...

A Friendly Competition I always felt like there should have been some sort of fallout from the comforting route and this is certainly fits with Shizune's love of games and competition. I usually feel bad for Hisao in your stories but he kind of brought this one on himself. By the sound of things it ...

Congratulations on finishing a full story! You took a decidedly crack-fic pairing and turned it into a surprisingly sweet romance. I really enjoyed the interactions between all the girls, but especially Misha and Hanako in that last chapter. They seem like a couple that would be a lot of fun to hang...

Nice update, curious to see if any more comes of the letter hiding. Also Misha, no! Why would you do that?

Hoitash wrote: ↑

Mon Dec 03, 2018 9:57 pm

Good update. Bad Misha, no biscuit.

Is that a Cowboy Bebop reference?

This one was much better! Poor Hisao just can't seem to catch a break in your fics though. Picked up a few rough spots for you; She felt a little guilty fooling him so, leading him along like an obedient little puppy, but. Only a little. The end of this bit looks a bit awkward, either get rid of the...

I really enjoyed this, one of very few poly fics that actually comes across as being a believable situation. I particularly enjoyed the little asides as you fade to black a few times there.

The Meiko story felt a little flat to me. I kind of get what you were going for with the "Oh by the way they've been bonking during this whole conversation" thing, but I'm not sure it worked. The other thing that bothered me is Emi apparently being fine with sharing her boyfriend with her mother. I ...

Oh Hisao, you poor foolish boy!

The change of POVs there was a little confusing at times but an enjoyable crack fic anyway.