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by Scroff
Fri Jun 14, 2019 10:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story)
Replies: 6
Views: 198

Re: Riposte (Rika Story)

You always send me on an emotional roller-coaster! Your Hisao, just like the one in the original VN, has me shouting at him to NOT DO THAT YOU DUMBASS!! And I really like how you show him adapting to her.
by Scroff
Fri Jun 14, 2019 10:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)

Thanks so much, your positive reactions mean a lot to me! Of all the things I've written this was the most painful, involving months of agonising over whether I was portraying Hisao's internal monologue convincingly, justifying his decisions. The re-writes were legion! And thank-you for the word mud...
by Scroff
Thu Jun 13, 2019 8:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

A delicate balance

This one fits between Three of a perfect pair and "You are not alone..." , though there's no need to have read either before reading this one. Some mild smut in the middle. *** " 'A beginning is the time for taking the most delicate care that the balances are correct.' " Suzu's copy of Dune is near...
by Scroff
Sun Jun 02, 2019 1:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Some oneshots by me, Brick
Replies: 5
Views: 168

Re: Some oneshots by me, Brick

Intriguing... I'll be here when you've got more to tell us
by Scroff
Fri May 31, 2019 3:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 551

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

sgtpepper wrote:
Fri May 31, 2019 10:22 am
I just thought it'd be a very Miki-way to end that part of the fic
That was my take-away from what you wrote, showing that she's not completely comfortable with receiving and expressing affection
by Scroff
Wed May 29, 2019 2:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)
Replies: 20
Views: 551

Re: The Involuntary Lock-In (Hisao x Miki)

That was adorable!
sgtpepper wrote:
Wed May 29, 2019 1:17 pm
pretty sure including "gaylord" in your Miki fic is in of the terms of service for the forums
Damn, I've been doing it wrong...
by Scroff
Wed May 15, 2019 9:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 5-14-19)
Replies: 40
Views: 3745

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 5-14-19)

Dammit Mrs Nakai, did you have to live up to every cliche about over-protective mothers?! At least our heroes are being mature about the whole situation. I can't remember any fic where Hisao's dad is the only one unsure about his offspring's choice of partner, it tends to be his mum who is wary or h...
by Scroff
Wed May 15, 2019 9:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-05-14)

Thanks Mirage! I went backwards and forwards several times on the lyrics (I've had a lot of love for The Cure for decades and last thing I wanted was to infringe copyright, hence linking the band's home page) and I didn't like any of my solutions so I went for an approach that would allow the reader...
by Scroff
Tue May 14, 2019 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

Lullaby

Although this contains no smut, it does feature mature themes and may be upsetting. The music video playing in the common room at the start is Lullaby by The Cure . *** We're sitting in the common room on another tedious Saturday afternoon. We should be making the most of the mid-September weather ...
by Scroff
Fri Apr 19, 2019 3:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avenues of Communication (updated 5-14-19)
Replies: 40
Views: 3745

Re: Avenues of Communication (updated 4-17-19)

Another great chapter with significant development for Hisao. "You are not an island" is an important, humbling, lesson - learning it had a profound effect on me.
by Scroff
Fri Apr 19, 2019 2:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)

Thank-you all! I wasn't even working on the second one, it was just an outline about old man Hisao looking back on his time with Saki, then... “Well, Hisao Scroff, you might be the first, but I don’t think you’ll be the last to be subconsciously influenced by popular lyrics.” ...I heard True Love Wa...
by Scroff
Sun Apr 14, 2019 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-06-13)
Replies: 97
Views: 6395

True Love Waits

He pulls himself up from the seat and shuffles to the kitchen. His body tells him to eat, to drink; he obeys though there is no savour to be had. As he washes the dishes he watches the children playing in the park across the road while the young mothers enjoy each other's company, one eye on their o...
by Scroff
Tue Apr 09, 2019 12:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#58—'Compromise')
Replies: 267
Views: 72992

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#56—'Comfort') (X)

It always seemed to me that you have a special affection for Shizune and Kenji, I bet you didn't have to think twice about which pairing to choose.

I found this heart-warming but the thought of a Shizune-Kenji alliance running amok after graduation is more than a little scary...
by Scroff
Tue Apr 09, 2019 12:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Jun 1st, 2019: Brief Exchanges)
Replies: 46
Views: 3300

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Apr 8, 2019: Undercover Journalism)

So much fun! Wonderful dynamics between Miki and Hanako, and Naomi and Natsume.
by Scroff
Tue Apr 09, 2019 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1921

Re: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019

And there was me thinking you meant it to remain a mystery!

Evocative as always, you're great at painting pictures in my mind