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by sloth4
Tue Oct 09, 2018 8:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)
Replies: 548
Views: 186729

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 10/4/18)

Spoiler alert: Misha cheats on Hisao with Iwanako!

Shocking, right? Gotta love twist endings.

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More seriously, that note to Iwanako was pretty well written. Probably the best I've seen in a fic.

And Misha's dream... well, bit strange, but I'm interested to see where you take it.
by sloth4
Tue Sep 25, 2018 8:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

There were a lot of quotable sections in this, especially from Rin. :mrgreen:
by sloth4
Thu Sep 20, 2018 3:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 3834

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

That's now happened to me three times. (At least once on the Reddit.) I remember the one on here that was practically verbatim, and the subsequent beatdown from you and others before the thread was locked down. I'd never seen something so brazen before. It was so peculiar that I wasn't even outrage...
by sloth4
Thu Sep 20, 2018 8:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 3834

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Uhhh... I get that most people probably haven't read my fic recently enough to be totally aware of this, but this is immensely derivative of my work. EDIT: The later installments seem to be mostly original, but such a staggering amount of the setup is taken from my work that if nothing else I deser...
by sloth4
Tue Sep 18, 2018 10:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)
Replies: 9
Views: 750

Re: When the Puddles Dry - Post Rin Neutral/True Ending Epilogue, One Shot(?)

I like it. Feels a bit short for a review, but I think that's all I have to say.
by sloth4
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

I feel its not a bad idea to play it safe. Some people can be turned off reading by outlandish scenarios, and some can be turned off by reading normal "plain" scenarios. Your current story is heading in a way that strikes a middle path, providing something different from the normal fiction written ...
by sloth4
Tue Sep 11, 2018 10:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Hmm, a lesbian threesome... is there anything more beautiful than that? Spoiler alert: the answer is 'no.'

It'll be interesting to see how that all turns out once Lilly gets back. More interesting is how you plan to handle the actual birthday.
by sloth4
Wed Sep 05, 2018 2:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Lilly, you cad! Put down that bottle, girl!

Good chapter, nice drama. It's a frightening dilemma I imagine, since Hanako loves them both. Monogamy can be a pain sometimes. :P
by sloth4
Tue Aug 14, 2018 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako's New Hat
Replies: 9
Views: 879

Re: Hanako's New Hat

I'm not sure what to think about this. It's very short, but also very unique. Might be good as a one-shot comic. ... I'd guess you were pretty literally inspired by that promo art for crud's new project and got to writing right away. I wouldn't have known without this, so thanks! What is this, exact...
by sloth4
Fri Aug 10, 2018 3:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 3834

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I only have Leaty’s version to compare to, your Iwanako is less bitter and depressed, not unlike the difference between your Rika and the nihilistic one everyone thinks about. I was worried about how derivative this piece would be (which is why I never bothered writing an Iwanako fic myself), but yo...
by sloth4
Thu Aug 09, 2018 8:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Wed Aug 08, 2018 10:16 pm

“Sure, Naocchan, sure~! Shicchan made me get drinks for us all the time, so~! It’s just like always, wahaha~!”
I think you mean 'Natsu-nyan' here.
by sloth4
Mon Jul 30, 2018 2:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Ridiculous as it is, I can totally see a school punishing its students and not taking responsibility for its own misgivings -- bureaucratic solutions like that happen all the time in real life. Hanako and Misha aren't responsible for Hisao, the school is. They never bothered to fix the fence or the ...
by sloth4
Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Call me overly optimistic, but I think there's still a chance for Hisao and Hanako to get together.

Hanako getting flustered over this stuff is adorable, and it's good to see her anger coming to the surface more readily. Equally good is that she can rein it in.
by sloth4
Fri Jul 20, 2018 6:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

QuietlySomething wrote:
Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:15 pm
Tfw Hanako Fancopter writes 3 times the amount of chapters in your fic in 1/8th of the time
It is quite impressive, especially given the quality produced. Reminds me a bit of when Downix published an entire Rika route in a month or two.
by sloth4
Fri Jul 20, 2018 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11229

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

I wonder how this will affect Misha and Hanako, if they'll feel guilty for keeping the roof meetings secret and not doing more to enforce the roof ban. Not that they'd really be at fault, but guilt is insidious like that.