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by Beeronious
Tue Sep 03, 2019 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]

And I finally am able to follow up on the replies and comments! Thanks again for the feedback. I think I spoke to Feux about his already. The main thing is with Yuuto's note passing. I do think I went overboard with the elaborate notes. I'll try and correct it on the future. I've applied all the cor...
by Beeronious
Fri Aug 16, 2019 10:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Vygotsky Most days I feel like breakfast is an arbitrary necessity. I’m not sure if it is my medications, or simply my metabolism, but I never feel an overwhelming need to have breakfast. Today is not one of those days. Emi was running with an unearthly determination this morning. The focus and spe...
by Beeronious
Fri Aug 16, 2019 10:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Act II: A Single Grain of Sand Dealing With The Hand That's Dealt The chirp of the alarm sounds its usual greeting that pulls me from my dreamless slumber. I can still feel Kawana's slender fingertips on my wrist as if they were still there. Stretching my arms as I get to my feet I smile to myself....
by Beeronious
Mon Jun 03, 2019 11:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]
Replies: 4
Views: 445

The Ritual Beneath The Stars [One Shot]

Well since everybody else is being cool and posting their one shots I'd join in with my only one. Just a little diddy I wrote for the Valentines Day competition on the KS Discord. Hope you guys enjoy it in all its saccharine sappiness. The Ritual Beneath the Stars Melt 125g of calcified oil of the e...
by Beeronious
Mon May 13, 2019 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

For the most part, I love how you handled the cast. Except for Miki. Big Sexy? Snoozu? Gaylord? I pretty much hate your Miki. Not gonna lie Oddball. I thought of you and Mirage when I came up wrote for Miki. Next time I’ll have her speak entirely in 2015 memes. I enjoyed the scene where Misaki and ...
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 30, 2019 5:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

I kinda like crossovers, when it's well done. So, I'm intrigued. I will look forward to this story with pleasure. For now, it's pretty nice. Thanks for the comment. But I'm curious where you got the crossover part from. I'm guessing you mean Misaki. I briefly played One: Kagayaku Kisetsu e, but sto...
by Beeronious
Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Fri Jan 04, 2019 1:38 pm
You probably shouldn't have given away that it's about MIsaki. That would have been a good twist for later on...
I had actually thought of that.
However, I like the idea of the Ikuno thing going on, and the reader knowing it is doomed. Maybe I'm just a sadist.
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Black Dog I wipe the accumulated condensation from the bathroom mirror. I have to admit, taking a long, proper shower feels rather nice. Ever since I left the hospital, my showering routine has been rather Spartan, consisting of only washing the essential areas to ensure I am not offensive to other...
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

A Maudlin Smile The incessant chirp of the alarm clock tears me from my slumber. A swift slam of my hand silences its cruel siren call. As I sit up, recollecting my thoughts, I notice I am still in my school uniform from yesterday. I vaguely recall resting my head on the pillow for a moment after c...
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

The Language of Flowers "Sorry I'm late." I certainly did not expect to find myself laid out in the bed of the nurse's office. Then again I suppose as the Nurse put it, I didn't show very good judgement. I can hear Mai in my head chiding me for being such a blithering idiot. She would likely have s...
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Parting the Iron Curtain Well this is an awkward way to start a Thursday. I look at the group assignment Mutou has nonchalantly dropped in front of me, then to the two empty desks to my right. I suppose even if the dynamic duo were here, they would hardly be interested in helping me out. I suppose ...
by Beeronious
Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 2396

Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]

Remarks: Some of you may have remembered I posted my early attempt at a Misaki route around a year ago. That story has (obviously) been abandoned. Looking back on it, I had become unsatisfied with several aspects of it. These were in relation to the plot and where the story, and Misaki had gone vs....
by Beeronious
Thu Jul 19, 2018 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 5401

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

I'm sorry, I couldn't read past Chapter 3. The effort put into making Takashi seem like some kind of scumbag just made this massively uncomfortable for me to read (I just dislike when purely negative traits are ascribed to a character). Which is sad, because I was in love with this concept when it ...
by Beeronious
Sun Mar 11, 2018 5:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forced Perspective - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route
Replies: 20
Views: 2977

Re: Forced Perspective - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Probably the most mature reply to Iwanako's letter I have read in any route, including the original VN. Though she would probably appreciate being adressed by her correct name "Iwan a ko"... I wanted to write Hisao as somebody who has had to grow up way faster than normal. Hence his tendency to eas...
by Beeronious
Sun Mar 11, 2018 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forced Perspective - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route
Replies: 20
Views: 2977

Re: Forced Perspective - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Yeah. I think that conversation isn't something you should skip. It feels too important. Also, I think they both get a bit too technical defining their disabilities. As mentioned by not just you, but Mirage_GSM, StilesLong. I completely agree that this need to be addressed. When I first did that bi...