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by yanivp
Wed Apr 15, 2020 7:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 4/15)

Top tier snu-snu, and everything else. For real though, the sex scene was PERFECT. I've been through that experience, that reaction from the girl for the same thing, every little bit. It really hit home that - the sense of (ironic) impotency as you try to calm to someone that feel they've hurt you, ...
by yanivp
Mon Jan 13, 2020 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/12)

Excellent chapter. I could feel my eyes watering in some parts, and some real, barely contained anger in others. That brief, quiet shouting match was written superbly. I noticed a little typo, by the way: “Look, for what it’s worth, I think your right,” Shuya says, his face softening as he looks dow...
by yanivp
Fri Feb 22, 2019 8:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/21)

But like, they bang sometimes. Or not. But they absolutely do. And Saki has no problems whatsoever and lives forever. I like this ending.
by yanivp
Thu Feb 21, 2019 4:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/21)

Two characters who share a sincere connection? Each character having to deal with the prospect of their partner's imminent departure?? TIGHT HUGGING??? I sense a loooooove triaaaangle. If not, or either way, this was a beautifully paced bit of introspection on Hisao's part. As you write it, it feels...
by yanivp
Thu Nov 15, 2018 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Oneshot 11/15)

It works! This is superbly convincing lesbian erotica! I absolutely canonise this, yes, definitely, oh hell yes they banged, 10/10, good times. Lovely!
by yanivp
Sat Oct 20, 2018 7:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 3 Completed 8/20)

Eurobeatjester, always work on yourself before this. You've been consistently delivering something exceptional, so never force yourself to write this story if it doesn't suit you - I think everyone thinks that we'd rather you stick around and enjoy creating this than burnout and stop short.
by yanivp
Thu Aug 23, 2018 7:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Act 3 Completed 8/20)

As always, beautifully written. Saki and Hisao really seem to wrap up all our feelings of what we can't have, and how to deal with it. I'm scared how this story will end, but I'm sure you're gonna keep us along for one amazing ride. With that in mind Saki seems to be a surprisingly literal embodimen...
by yanivp
Mon Mar 05, 2018 8:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/2)

A superb piece as always. My one qualm is when you write exchanges of dialogue between characters When they're 1 line replies, it's okay, and easy enough to tell who's talking, but for example, when Chisato and Mitsuru are arguing, since the group is so large, it's quite difficult to tell who is say...
by yanivp
Wed Dec 20, 2017 6:42 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2405
Views: 249180

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

...you decide that Saki is best girl (shout out to eurobeatjester for feeding my addiction like the enabler they are).
...you lament the sheer unfairness of disability and mortality.
...you use the game as an emotional crutch to deal with your own issues.
by yanivp
Wed Dec 20, 2017 4:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)
Replies: 1090
Views: 316162

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Artwork 9/17)

And thus, you have turned me into an utter weeb. It's not even Japanese - it fanfiction of a western VN (a game typically made in Japan) set in Japan. That's like 3 levels of weeb. This is the furthest down the weeb hole I've ever been. It is dark here, and I am squeeing over cripple sex. Lord have ...