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by WessardWite
Tue May 19, 2020 6:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)
Replies: 6
Views: 539

Re: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)

Much better now. There's kind of a nice nostalgic sad feeling where Hisao is wishing for what could have been. I think the ending lets it down though. I have no problems with Rin returning, but I don't see why she would move back in to the altier and the rushing towards her part feels like it's fro...
by WessardWite
Sun Apr 19, 2020 6:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)
Replies: 6
Views: 539

Re: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)

From a technical view there is nothing to complain about. Spelling, grammar as well as structure are very good. This was something I worried about, so I’m glad I got that part down! From a story perspective this seems as if it would be the prologue to a longer story, but as a training piece that mi...
by WessardWite
Sat Mar 21, 2020 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)
Replies: 6
Views: 539

Re: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)

Good call. I’ll fix that. Thanks for the suggestion!
by WessardWite
Fri Mar 20, 2020 6:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)
Replies: 6
Views: 539

Old Habits Die Hard (Rin Neutral Ending - Twelve Years Later)

Since coming back to the Sendai area after college and becoming a science teacher at Yamaku, whenever I feel lost, in some respect, I’ve taken to coming to the 22nd Corner Art Exhibition. Each day, there’s another blossoming artist’s work on display. Even after all these years, I’m still no better a...