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by Kobrahawk1210
Tue Nov 06, 2018 9:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1598

Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

Act Two, Part Two “Um, hi, Hisao.” I can’t believe my eyes; is Iwanako really here? Or is this some trick conjured up from the side effects of my heavy medication? “Iwanako, hi. Uh, have a seat?” What do you even say in a situation like this? Everything I wanted to tell her after that first stay in...
by Kobrahawk1210
Mon Nov 05, 2018 5:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1598

Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

It's not dead, huzzah! Part two is currently being run through with my editors, who have kindly agreed to point out all of the grammatical mistakes I make and run on sentences I use. Sorry for the long break- I go through phases of being really into writing, and really not, and I just happened to le...
by Kobrahawk1210
Tue May 29, 2018 6:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1598

Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

Given that the hospital he is in is quite a way from Hisao's hometown it's a bit unlikely that his parents can spend so much time there over several days... or that Iwanako would be able to visit him there. Not sure if you're planning on giving an explanation for that. It's the kind of thing that i...
by Kobrahawk1210
Fri May 25, 2018 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1598

Re: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

Act Two, Part One The sound of shuffling feet and an incessant beeping. The clean scent of sterility. A pounding ache in my head… no… everywhere. Where am I? Did I die? My eyes open, only to immediately close as my senses are assaulted with a blinding light coupled with a worsening headache. Squint...
by Kobrahawk1210
Fri May 25, 2018 5:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute
Replies: 10
Views: 1598

A Roadside Picnic: Iwanako Pseudoroute

Hello good people of KS Renai! This is a pretty hefty project I'm taking on that will probably take me a long time to finish, so I apologize for that head of time. Constructive criticisms are always welcome, and I do hope you'll enjoy the story I craft as I make my way through it. This fic takes pla...