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by StilesLong
Mon Jul 01, 2019 3:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Academy Random Writing Challenge
Replies: 0
Views: 177

Yamaku Academy Random Writing Challenge

At the Yamaku Academy discord server, I run a regularly occurring KS writing contest/challenge (more of the latter than the former). Each contestant is assigned a randomly-generated prompt (Thanks, SGTPepper!) that has at its core a list of pairings of KS characters. One pairing of characters must b...
by StilesLong
Fri Mar 22, 2019 8:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]
Replies: 6
Views: 788

Re: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]

Part Three: Physio and paintings After class a couple days later, Atsuko wheels herself out of the girl’s dorms, a toque pulled tight over her thinning black hair. She’s on her way to the Auxiliary Building, which in her present condition means an annoying and lengthy detour around the front of the...
by StilesLong
Tue Mar 19, 2019 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]
Replies: 6
Views: 788

Re: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]

Part 2: Preparation Contrary to the advice she gave Morihiro, Atsuko doesn’t go to her room when she gets back to the dorms. Instead, she wheels past her own door and up to her hallmate’s. “You’re early!” is the only answer that Atsuko gets to her knock. Moments later, she hears the familiar sound ...
by StilesLong
Sun Dec 23, 2018 3:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: StilesLong's One-shots
Replies: 16
Views: 3574

Re: StilesLong's One-shots

Silentcook wrote:
Sun Dec 23, 2018 2:56 pm
StilesLong wrote:
Sun Dec 23, 2018 12:25 pm
...something?
Yeah, that was barely worth the electrons expended in its composition.

No violations this time, but still a sterling example of why the "no requesting" sticky exists, really. :roll:
Aw, jeez. Completely forgot about the rules. Sorry, Cook.
by StilesLong
Sun Dec 23, 2018 12:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: StilesLong's One-shots
Replies: 16
Views: 3574

"Commission" for Scratchminus

I'll pay someone in love and affection for a fic of Emi calling me a nerd and having lunch on a rooftop I don't think I'm getting paid for this one but here you are, Scratchy! "Hey Scratchy," Emi calls as she walks toward him in the deserted hallway. "What's up, Emi?" Scratchy sounds confused, and ...
by StilesLong
Sun Dec 23, 2018 1:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]
Replies: 6
Views: 788

Re: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]

The honorific thing came about because I can't say I know enough about them to not mess it up.

I hope you've enjoyed it so far. I'll try to get our characters to Yokohama at some point in the near future.
by StilesLong
Sat Dec 22, 2018 3:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 52
Views: 6079

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

I feel terrible replying WEEKS after poor Bricky posted but here we are. You must have been aware of my own dislike for Hisao because you beat the shit out of the poor guy. Having said that, it was entirely appropriate. Nothing felt out of place and I think it all fit with his own complacency. I'm a...
by StilesLong
Sat Dec 22, 2018 2:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]
Replies: 6
Views: 788

Destination: Yokohama [9S-OC]

My victim this year was Mirage_GSM. The prompt: A group of Yamaku students visit the Yokohama Christmas market while on a weekend trip to Tokyo. (Writing OCs is not required but encouraged.) Link for reference: https://jw-webmagazine.com/christmas-ma ... 46876b5b72[sic] An unbroken link . I'm only p...
by StilesLong
Mon Dec 17, 2018 1:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: StilesLong's One-shots
Replies: 16
Views: 3574

Evening (Shizune one-shot)

Inspired by this image . “It’s my favourite customer again!” The girl saw Sachihiro’s lips move, struggled to read their words but smiled anyways at the kind, familiar face. She produced a notebook from her school bag, wrote something down, then carried it to him. Sachihiro shook his head and repeat...
by StilesLong
Mon Nov 12, 2018 9:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: 8S-Lights Out for Craftyatom (Updated for Part 0)
Replies: 6
Views: 487

Re: 8S-Lights Out for Craftyatom

Misako’s hand seemed smaller and bonier today, though she still clung to mine as tightly as she could as I led her out of the Oncology wing on the eighth floor. “R-ready to go back to y-your room?” The pom-pom on her toque bobbling more violently than the tiny up-and-down motion of her bald head cal...
by StilesLong
Sun Sep 30, 2018 1:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)
Replies: 1778
Views: 233708

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180924 Sherlock Hisao)

This fic was interesting, in a way. I got the impression that there was a lot more happening behind the scenes that we never learn anything more about. The author clearly had a backstory to Iwanako and Hisao that comes up long enough to intrigue the reader, then abruptly disappears, never to be ment...
by StilesLong
Sun Mar 11, 2018 6:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)
Replies: 1778
Views: 233708

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180305 'Madam Lillian's Specialty Service')

I had to stop reading part of the way through: partially due to length, but mostly because I'm not a huge fan of these sorts of fics. However, it was hard not to notice that the writing was crisp and clear and the pacing good. The fic was well carried-off, for what it was, though it was certainly qu...
by StilesLong
Wed Feb 21, 2018 1:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)
Replies: 1778
Views: 233708

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180218 'Schwäche' by WetCrate)

Can we have, moving forward, some sort of notice that says, "hey guys, this is pre-whatever canon"? I'll try to do that. But I think pre-2012 you can make allowances, post-2012 or so there is no excuse for breaking canon. What do you think? I don't think we need to make any kind of notice on it, pe...
by StilesLong
Wed Feb 21, 2018 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)
Replies: 1778
Views: 233708

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180218 'Schwäche' by WetCrate)

Also for context, since some of the comments seem to have missed it, this was posted May 27, 2009. Act 1 was released on April 29, 2009. The Canon was much smaller back then, with a lot more unknowns. It's really not fair to judge it for inconsistencies with post-Act 1 Canon. Can we have, moving fo...
by StilesLong
Tue Feb 20, 2018 10:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190715 Radioactive/Call of Yamaku)
Replies: 1778
Views: 233708

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180218 'Schwäche' by WetCrate)

The passing reference to Hanako's "family issues" struck me as odd somehow. Just say she didn't have family and would feel bad alone. She's not got family issues in the ordinary sense so you need to specify. In general, I liked the way the author writes ("A croak escaped Hisao's lips then, regret co...