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- Fri Jul 07, 2017 9:07 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
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Re: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Gree
The narration style for this piece was actually inspired by Slaughterhouse-Five , which is also referenced in the first two lines: Listen: Rin Tezuka has come unstuck in thought. Slaughterhouse-Five actually does have a narrator; it technically uses first-person narration the whole way through, but ...
- Thu Jul 06, 2017 3:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
I wrote a little thing about Rin. -- [ Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green ] -- Listen: Rin Tezuka has become unstuck in thought. -- There’s a mural. It’s white, and red, and the color of the sea, and the color of thought, and the color of that feeling you get when you wake up and have no idea where...
- Wed Jul 05, 2017 12:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: StilesLong's One-shots - The Secret Santa
- Replies: 23
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Re: Blackout [One-shot]
Hi, and from one newbie to another: welcome! It seems pretty short at first, but the length works pretty well, given that this is pretty much only describes a moment. Your poetic and introspective writing style is very nice, and it seems to fit a mature Hanako very well. There are a few parts where ...
- Fri Jun 30, 2017 12:42 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Re: Visionary's Writing - Act 0: Deterioration (Latest 6/30)
As for things that stuck out to me: - One thing the VN never claimed Hisao's condition to be was "progressive". In fact it's explicitly stated that it isn't. - Performing heart surgery while the patient is awake is something I've never heard of before. First off: thanks for the detailed c...
- Fri Jun 30, 2017 3:11 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Deterioration - Epilogue and Notes
[ Epilogue: Survival ] It’s been twelve years since my first heart attack. I’m back in my home city with my wife, visiting my parents. It’s a long weekend, for both me and my students at Yamaku. It’s a cold February morning, and everywhere I look, stark white snow covers everything: the streets, th...
- Fri Jun 30, 2017 3:10 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Act 0: Deterioration
Act 0: Deterioration http://i.imgur.com/gvHySHZl.png (Artwork courtesy of my sister.) This pseudo-Act covers Hisao’s time in the hospital, from his admission to his discharge (and a small bit beyond). It’s first purpose is to probe deeply into Hisao’s condition, reconcile what we see in-game to rea...
- Sat Jun 24, 2017 11:12 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Re: One Little Day and A Call to Yamaku
Thanks for the feedback, everyone. Damn. That was a really intense read. Your portrayal of the KS characters was very good and description of all the medical knowledge makes me think you know a thing or two :wink: 'Intense' was definitely what I was going for; it's been a while since I've last reall...
- Fri Jun 23, 2017 5:58 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
A Call to Yamaku
A Call to Yamaku When minutes matter. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I stare at the mess below me, my face contorted in concentration. Time is of the essence, but… one false move, one mistake, could lead to utter disaster. I reach ...
- Fri Jun 23, 2017 5:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
- Replies: 18
- Views: 8191
Visionary's Writing - Everything, Nothing, Red, and Green
Link to the latest released stuff. Index: One Little Day (this post, below) - When everything goes wrong. A Call to Yamaku - When minutes matter. Companion piece to One Little Day. Act 0: Deterioration - A small little prequel Act about Hisao's hospitalization and condition. Everything, Nothing, Re...