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by QuietlySomething
Sun Mar 31, 2019 7:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 3/31/2019)
Replies: 34
Views: 6398

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The Moon and the Earth Thin glass double-doors were the only things standing between Rin and the big grey lobby of a skyscraper, which stretched up so high you could barely see the top. The doors had to be pulled in order to be opened. Each had a handle near the center- little silver bars at torso-...
by QuietlySomething
Sun Sep 23, 2018 8:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219033

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180924 Sherlock Hisao)

Personally I enjoyed this one for what it was, although I do have to admit it was basically petering out more and more with every chapter. Still, I liked the terrible detective narration and dialogue. Especially in the first chapter. Hisao comes across less like Sherlock Holmes and more like Charlie...
by QuietlySomething
Tue Aug 14, 2018 6:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 3/31/2019)
Replies: 34
Views: 6398

Re: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 8/8/2018)

Not exactly the direction I was expecting this chapter to go, but certainly one I had considered. I especially liked the ending, where neither Yumi nor Rin are happy, but for opposite reasons. This chapter fit the flow of the story really well, in my opinion, and had some important elements that di...
by QuietlySomething
Wed Aug 08, 2018 6:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Black Iris (A Rin Epilogue; Update 3/31/2019)
Replies: 34
Views: 6398

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Great Wave off Kanagawa Rin painted and painted and painted, and then it was the night of the spring exhibition, just like that. world Rin Tezuka She had a sign, a little white one with golden edges, which guarded the entrance to her display in the corner of the first floor. The 'Rin Tezuka' exhibi...
by QuietlySomething
Mon Aug 06, 2018 1:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219033

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180716 Some One-Shots)

Wow, three Hanako stories and zero Akira stories. I see how it is, Oddball... I see...
by QuietlySomething
Thu Aug 02, 2018 11:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 49
Views: 2943

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

Being able to get in other people's heads is a sign of intelligence. Generally people with higher IQs are better at lying, better at making people laugh, better at manipulating others (intentionally that is), and are generally more successful in social situations. Scientifically speaking a genius is...
by QuietlySomething
Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 49
Views: 2943

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

The theory that Rin actually just has a genius level IQ sounds to me like something someone came up with to reconcile the fact that they identify with Rin’s social difficulties with the fact that they believe THEMSELVES to be a misunderstood genius.

IE I think it’s kind of silly.
by QuietlySomething
Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route
Replies: 49
Views: 2943

Re: Odd Friendship: A Hanako and Rin Route

If I can be honest, that just feels like a defiant misunderstanding of the character. It’s the same sort of reaction I have when I see someone writing Hanako as a social butterfly as a way of somehow objecting to the characterization of her as antisocial. It just doesn’t do a very good job of captur...
by QuietlySomething
Sun Jul 22, 2018 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 30018

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]

TheNexus97 wrote:
Sun Jul 22, 2018 11:24 am
Discovered this fic today and OH MY GOSH AOI IS SO CUTE I MUST PROTECT HER.

Is this story dead or what? Please tell me it's not dead :(
Well given that it hasn’t updated in 2 1/2 years, if it isn’t dead then it’s in a very deep sleep.
by QuietlySomething
Fri Jul 20, 2018 3:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako; Complete)
Replies: 136
Views: 11433

Re: An Unusual Friendship (Misha x Hanako)

Tfw Hanako Fancopter writes 3 times the amount of chapters in your fic in 1/8th of the time
by QuietlySomething
Thu Jul 19, 2018 3:19 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 3931

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Mm, that possibility was concerning to me when I read it.
by QuietlySomething
Thu Jul 19, 2018 3:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 3931

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

Well I have to say, I was a little concerned about this fic from the premise. I think someone a little less committed could easily just take the VN and do a lazy gender-bend with it, so I was happy to see that your story does not feel like that at all. I really enjoyed the prologue especially, felt ...
by QuietlySomething
Mon Jul 16, 2018 9:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Naomi Inoue: Sixteen in Ten
Replies: 4
Views: 1175

Re: Naomi Inoue: Sixteen in Ten

I’m feeling the heat Ria :oops:
by QuietlySomething
Fri Jul 13, 2018 7:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 52200

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

All good points. Especially about not arguing with readers... ay yi yi :x
by QuietlySomething
Thu Jul 12, 2018 1:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 20886

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)

Well, good for you! In more ways than one.

Welcome back!