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by InSaiyan
Fri May 19, 2017 12:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/6)
Replies: 877
Views: 171923

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 5/18)

My man! Glad to see that you're back in action! Great chapter, looking forward to the next one!
by InSaiyan
Sun Apr 09, 2017 3:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4

You know I think you're laying on Mutou a bit too thickly. If every single one of his lessons consisted of just "read the book!" he probabbly would have been fired by now... Haha, our high school experiences must have been much different then, especially around finals. You also misspelled "sits" in...
by InSaiyan
Sat Apr 08, 2017 2:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 5: Baby Steps (Continued) ----- "I'm starving!" Naomi exclaims, as she brings out a few containers of food from under the table. She gently sits them on the tabletop in front of us and pops the top off of them, letting steam flow up towards the ceiling. My senses are filled with the distinct s...
by InSaiyan
Sun Mar 26, 2017 6:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 5: Baby Steps (Continued) ----- I lightly tap my knucles on Nurses door, half-expecting Emi to be on the other side, playing jokes again. The distant sound of papers shuffling is the only noise that I can hear coming from the other side of the door. I knock again, a little louder this time. "C...
by InSaiyan
Mon Mar 20, 2017 12:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

It's about damn time Hisao! For a second there I thought he wasn't going to confess... Haha, the awkward butterfly is slowly breaking out of its social cocoon! Seriously, though, I'm not quite sure what to think of Natsume. On one hand she seems to be genuinely embarrassed by that stuff most of the...
by InSaiyan
Sun Mar 19, 2017 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Pedagogy
Replies: 46
Views: 23975

Re: Pedagogy

I'm not even sure how I found this, but I was not prepared, at all.

I'd say that I'm impressed, but idk wtf I feel right now.

Regardless, 5/7, perfect short story, will recommend.
by InSaiyan
Sat Mar 18, 2017 3:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 5: Baby Steps ----- According to my calendar, today is Tuesday, but I swear that it feels just like a second Monday. I woke up with a pounding headache this morning, and it reminded me that I never brought my sleep issues up to Nurse yesterday, not that I was given much opportunity to anyways....
by InSaiyan
Sun Mar 12, 2017 10:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 4: Slow-Crawl (Continued) ----- The bell for lunch suddenly rings through my ears, bringing me back into consciousness. Raising my head up from the desk, I look around the room in a daze, trying to regain my senses before I gather my stuff up to leave. The classroom is quickly emptying, but se...
by InSaiyan
Fri Mar 10, 2017 12:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 4: Slow-Crawl (Continued) ----- The sound of my own steps echoing through the empty hallway is the only noise that I can hear as I make my way away from the dance room, my mind still spinning from the events of the morning. I glance down at my wristwatch as I make my way towards the Nurses off...
by InSaiyan
Sun Mar 05, 2017 11:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

Thank you all for the kind words and the help correcting some mistakes! I love hearing how people are interpreting the story so far and it only drives me more to know that it's being enjoyed in one way or another. I'm right there with you, Hisao. InSaiyan is a cruel cruel man. Hahaha! Don't hate the...
by InSaiyan
Sun Mar 05, 2017 1:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 4: Slow-Crawl ----- A dull blue light trickles into my room from the window over my desk as I roll over to my side once more. My eyelids fight back and forth, simultaneously refusing to close, and refusing to stay open. I was completely exhausted when I went to bed last night, so, why am I awa...
by InSaiyan
Sat Mar 04, 2017 5:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 3

I like this chapter a lot! I feel like if Naomi wasn't third-wheeling they would have kissed... Dangit Naomi Thank you very much! I have something special planned for that moment. Hopefully the teasing will be worth it! Should be sight not site. Thank you! This is a mixture of two questions. Decide...
by InSaiyan
Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 3: Fireflies (Continued) ----- The colorful lights overhead slowly fade away, ushering back in the blackness of the night sky. The gentle glow of the moon and stars twinkle, peacefully dancing with one another. I hear distant clapping coming from the Festival area. I glance over towards the no...
by InSaiyan
Sun Feb 26, 2017 2:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 2

I'm a little confused about the part where they brushed cheeks. Was that supposed to be a hug or just her getting close to whisper that phrase? That was just her leaning in closer to whisper that to Hisao. Sorry that it created some confusion, I could have done a better job of explaining the situat...
by InSaiyan
Sat Feb 25, 2017 6:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route(Updated 4/8)
Replies: 74
Views: 10236

Re: Teach Me To Dance - A Natsume Ooe Pseudo-Route

Part 3: Fireflies (continued) ----- My mind is in a frenzy, thoughts of doubt and insecurity bouncing rapidly off of the walls of my skull. I feel the awkward beats in my chest picking up a little, making my breathing a little more difficult. This is exactly what I was afraid of, but I'd be lying i...