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by Zerebos
Thu Jan 17, 2019 10:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1727

Re: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit 01/08/2019

I think this turned out rather well considering the subject matter at hand. I really like how it was handled through imagery mainly. Not only did it not come out vulgar it feels like it strongly drives the point home and even gives you an insight to their mind. It had its purple parts for sure, but ...
by Zerebos
Thu Jan 17, 2019 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 1/17/19)
Replies: 9
Views: 617

Re: Winter's Blossom (An S9 Submission)

Winter’s Blossom - Part 2 “Hisaoooo.” I wake up to being poked in the face. “Hisaoooo wake up, we’re pulling in to Tokyo Station.” I groggily sit up, pulling my head off of Ikuno’s shoulder. “Sleep well?” “Yeah I guess.” I nod weakly. “I’m not used to getting up that early.” “5am isn’t really that ...
by Zerebos
Thu Jan 17, 2019 7:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 1/17/19)
Replies: 9
Views: 617

Re: Winter's Blossom (An S9 Submission)

Thanks everyone for reading this at all! Chris - Totally agree that is a tough situation, but it gets better for Hisao don't worry. Mirage - While I'm glad I'm not last I still feel bad. And yeah, Ikuno might be just a bit bossy :lol: Feurox - I did do a tad bit of background writing :wink: I'm glad...
by Zerebos
Fri Jan 04, 2019 4:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 52
Views: 4682

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

Pablo, that is not at all the set of characters I expected with that prompt, but that's a good thing. I actually really liked the cast you chose and how you brought them together. Kenji stories like this are always hilarious and this is no exception. I think your characterization of him was pretty g...
by Zerebos
Thu Jan 03, 2019 7:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 1/17/19)
Replies: 9
Views: 617

Re: Winter's Blossom (An S9 Submission)

Immediately I perk up and look at Ikuno. “I knew that’d get your attention.” She chuckles. “But I was kidding, sort of.” “Sort of?” “Well you can’t see me undress but—” “So, no,” I say teasingly. She gives me a dirty look for interrupting before continuing, “but, you can help me pick out a few shirt...
by Zerebos
Thu Jan 03, 2019 7:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 1/17/19)
Replies: 9
Views: 617

Winter's Blossom (Updated 1/17/19)

Your Prompt is: Hisao goes home for the winter holidays with a girl who was not featured in a canon route. (A mistletoe kiss would be enjoyed but not necessary.) Victim: PKMNthiefChris ----- I want to apologize for this being so late, I have had a lot of bad things happen this past month and it’s h...
by Zerebos
Fri Jul 13, 2018 11:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ekephrasis/ American Spirit / A Long Way Down 04/07/2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1727

Re: Ekephrasis: A Rika and Hisao Story

Just wonderful Feurox, seriously I thought this was lovely. I can agree with some of the previous sentiments of the sudden pairing of Suzu near the end. But it almost makes sense when you consider the characterizations of them you depicted here. They would be the exact people to impulsively get clos...
by Zerebos
Sat Jun 16, 2018 2:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dark Winter Sky (S8)
Replies: 7
Views: 1230

Re: Dark Winter Sky (S8)

Wow this was really well done, the characters felt spot-on and wonderfully vivid. It was also extremely cute, but I think the spotlight was stolen from Nurse in this one which was unexpected given the prompt :D
by Zerebos
Sat Jun 16, 2018 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "The New Year" S8 Submission: For - WillDFly
Replies: 8
Views: 1153

Re: "The New Year" S8 Submission: For - WillDFly

This an absolutely wonderful read. Definitely the type of experience I have come to expect from you :wink:
by Zerebos
Fri Jun 15, 2018 12:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission
Replies: 7
Views: 958

Re: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission

Totally not late in responding to this :oops: First of all thank you for doing such a good job on my vague prompt, you did a great capturing what I was after. This was a really great read and I think the overall metaphor that you accentuated at the end really embodies the feelings during the holiday...
by Zerebos
Sun Mar 11, 2018 11:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 3277

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 3 - Updated 3/11/18)

Well it took me all day to read this—not due to the writing itself, but because I got busy. But MAN it was worth all the time I took. You got some great writing going on here Scratchman. The story itself is so unique and captivating, and your characters feel so alive I love it. Tsu is absolutely ado...
by Zerebos
Thu Mar 08, 2018 4:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 112
Views: 10064

Re: Within a Looking Glass – A Rika pseudo-route

I was actually in the middle of replying when I noticed you updated. The story so far is cute, but to me it feels like things are being rushed along especially with that most recent post. Perhaps that's intentional especially due to how your Rika is but the whole timeline feels very quick. Your SPaG...
by Zerebos
Fri Mar 02, 2018 10:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/21)
Replies: 984
Views: 232845

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/6)

“Gods,” Saki says, a laugh bleeding into her shaking voice. “I can’t believe we did that.” Is Saki meant to be calling out to all the gods? :lol: Another good chapter, the shooting gallery scene was pretty cute and makes sense for Shizune's attitude. Poor Mitsuru though, if he knew what that yukata...
by Zerebos
Mon Jan 08, 2018 1:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/21)
Replies: 984
Views: 232845

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 1/6)

Great update as always Euro. I really enjoyed the interactions between Saki and Hisao during their night together—the playful banter, the kind words. It all felt real and warm. The writing itself was great, makes me wish I could capture scenery and thoughts the way you do. Only thing I didn't really...
by Zerebos
Tue Jan 02, 2018 3:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Our Holiday Vacation — A Shizune One-shot & 8S Submission
Replies: 8
Views: 1019

Re: Our Holiday Vacation — 8S Submission

First, I want to say thank you to everyone for the kind words. I really didn't think this would be so well received as I've never written Shizune before nor do I usually do such fluffy pieces.That said, I rather enjoyed writing it and might have to think about doing happier writing in the future in ...