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by Bottles
Mon Nov 05, 2018 12:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Closing the distance // A Rin Fic (Part 2)
Replies: 4
Views: 546

Re: Closing the distance // A Rin Fic

“Hi guys!” Emi’s high voice rings out through the small crowd of people stepping from the bus. She rushes past everyone and skids to a stop in front of Rin and I, her large bag left on the sidewalk by the bus. “How have you been!? Did you remember to eat? And Sleep?” She bombards Rin with questions,...
by Bottles
Wed Oct 17, 2018 10:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Closing the distance // A Rin Fic (Part 2)
Replies: 4
Views: 546

Re: Closing the distance // A Rin Fic

Mirage_GSM wrote:almost no Rin
True, I have more planned, just wanted to lay some groundwork first.
Mirage_GSM wrote:Pacing issues aside this was still a pretty solid start.
Thanks!
by Bottles
Wed Oct 17, 2018 7:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Closing the distance // A Rin Fic (Part 2)
Replies: 4
Views: 546

Closing the distance // A Rin Fic (Part 2)

Just finished re-reading Rin's route. I think there should be more, so I'm making some more. Rin is quite hard to write, so constructive criticism would be appreciated. Remember that it's bad luck to comment on art in progress. Maybe the risk is acceptable to you. More parts to come. Part 1 (This po...
by Bottles
Tue Jun 27, 2017 7:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 51660

Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]

It returns! \o/

Great to see you back Sharp
by Bottles
Mon Nov 28, 2016 6:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 7/30)
Replies: 1018
Views: 260219

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/31)

It took me long enough to read the whole thing but I'm finally caught up! Looking forward to the next part.
by Bottles
Thu Aug 04, 2016 10:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 51660

Re: Flutter - Level Twenty: Grinding [4/8/16]

We paid, like hell was I letting pay for me, and left to grab dessert.
Like hell I was letting him pay for me?

Loving this story, keep it up!