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by WillDfly
Tue Nov 28, 2017 8:09 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4854
Views: 363621

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

A bunch of us were and still are crying about it. We just lost a home, and while I'm not as bad off as some other people are, a lot of people just completely lost their own business if it was based out of there. I was getting to that point with the things I make. I have no idea what the rest of us ...
by WillDfly
Tue Nov 28, 2017 6:07 pm
Forum: Feedback
Topic: My commentary/review of Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 7
Views: 944

Re: My commentary/review of Katawa Shoujo

Minor disagreements on the review, but nothing big. Mostly entering the following discussion. Also, get perks for everyone, like [To a Tea], [Scarfing Down Pizza], [Orange You Glad?]... It might be time for dinner. It's more as if whoever wrote the choices in the Lilly route picked a random virtue w...
by WillDfly
Thu Nov 02, 2017 4:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Butterflies Affect
Replies: 7
Views: 860

Re: Butterflies Affect

YOTD - epilogue A hard nudge, nearly a headbutt, breaks my train of thought. She must've tried a few times to get my attention. I look down to some seriously disheveled auburn hair, and the girl that's the cause of so many of my smiles. The moon lights up her porcelain skin, and I can't help glanci...
by WillDfly
Thu Nov 02, 2017 4:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Butterflies Affect
Replies: 7
Views: 860

Re: Butterflies Affect

Okay, first of all I'm not a fan of gore stories in general and of zombie stories in particular, so the first part didn't appeal to me at all. The second part was better, but there are some problems regarding it's connections to the first part: For one thing it is quite unusual for RPG players to p...
by WillDfly
Thu Nov 02, 2017 2:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweet Dreams [One shot]
Replies: 9
Views: 1114

Re: Sweet Dreams [One shot]

Eh, I guess most of the "scriptiness" was removed by the long editing. Maybe having no prose in the same paragraph as dialogue is less significant than I thought. The experience is so removed from anything he's seen from Nurse, he can't even finish a word. ... The young girl is still miffed, looking...
by WillDfly
Thu Nov 02, 2017 8:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 12/3/18)
Replies: 548
Views: 191690

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Happy Birthday, Misha!

That was a rather long cliff-hanger, what with all the medical discussion in between and all. Glad to see this route resume, ProfA! Cliff-hanger? More like a cliff-clothesline, amIright? But seriously, really glad you're continuing one of the longer running series around, it gives a new breath of h...
by WillDfly
Tue Oct 31, 2017 2:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Butterflies Affect
Replies: 7
Views: 860

Butterflies Affect

One Halloween later, I finally got this out, and hopefully the other part will come soon. As usual, feedback is highly appreciated. Emi braced herself against the wall, catching her breath. Thank God they weren't that fast, but they were relentless. If she didn't have her racing legs on, she would ...
by WillDfly
Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tales from Yamaku: A Halloween Series of Stories
Replies: 31
Views: 2355

Re: Tales from Yamaku: A Halloween Series of Stories

You got this, Rin. C’mon you two, show me what you got! http://tvquotes.co/wp-content/uploads/2017/05/Rick-and-Morty-I-Like-What-You-Got.jpg I thought there was gonna be some ghost shenanigan from Emi's dad, but sweetness is also holiday-appropriate, thanks for the candy “I guess you’re stubbornnes...
by WillDfly
Mon Oct 30, 2017 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweet Dreams [One shot]
Replies: 9
Views: 1114

Re: Sweet Dreams [One shot]

“Speaking of Emi, I hear you stood her up. She was really, really sad, which made me very, very upset. If you do that again, your heart will stop being a problem, understood?” This line seems out of place to me, but otherwise the story seems interesting enough and even pretty cute. Do you mean it w...
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 6:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS lookalikes
Replies: 762
Views: 131101

Re: KS lookalikes

Pretty sure is a nod to its inspiration or to the similarity. It went through various patches since 2015 and it could have been added as an easter egg.

Or just full on highest form of flattery.
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 5:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweet Dreams [One shot]
Replies: 9
Views: 1114

Re: Sweet Dreams [One shot]

I was just going to answer directly, but practice is only gonna help me. Is this a 1,5-shot now? Mutou drops another book on the pile and rubs his temples, cradling a massive headache. His research's hit a stump, and none of this material is helping. He keeps amassing and registering data, but any ...
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 1:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tales from Yamaku: A Halloween Series of Stories
Replies: 31
Views: 2355

Re: Tales from Yamaku: A Halloween Series of Stories

Woman I just had to mow through enough Squats to start a game of Dwarf Fortress, do not test me. ... Again, deal with it. And yes, you are. Mork knows you have the legs for it. I also have a Kiki uniform, Louise from Familiar of Zero , and of course Hermione. Although I think Misha would look bette...
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 12:50 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Map?
Replies: 3
Views: 935

Re: Map?

I couldn't find a dedicated topic for it, but this followed the previous image and I'd like to add it to the discussion.
Image

Edit: I found one, but it's from '09 and it never went anywhere, so...
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 7:14 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: KS lookalikes
Replies: 762
Views: 131101

Re: KS lookalikes

Dorei to no Seikatsu -Teaching Feeling, by Ray-K and Freakily Charming, which seems to specialize on the uncanny. Head pat simulator/eroge/dress-up with a very familiar protagonist... http://i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/066/253/920.jpg They have burns (chemical, in Sylvie's case), are s...
by WillDfly
Sun Oct 29, 2017 5:00 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: You have been playing too much KS when...
Replies: 2402
Views: 205309

Re: You have been playing too much KS when...

When your deafault mentality changes, and you need to constantly remind yourself that not every protagonist has a heart condition.

"What? You can't do X, you'll get a heart attack! ... Nevermind, proceed."

Also, cripple puns.