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I'm really struggling to think of some criticism to offer, because this is really good. I suppose the melody could be stronger; the most memorable section begins at 0:49 and lasts till the end. But you know, that's hardly a criticism, because I think Suzu's intro should sound this scattershot, with...

Er... I'm not sure if anyone's actually going to see this, which is saddening. This subforum doesn't seem very popular. But, I wrote a brief theme piece for Suzu Suzuki. The "B Theme" simply means that this would be a piece that would probably play during her hypothetical animation after A...

"I'd say the characters are mostly faithful to the source but I feel like where the deviations exist you can feel them acting a little different" Could you give me some examples? I'm thinking of several myself and want to see if you have noted them. Shizune's apology (personally I think s...

I'm not sure I agree the characters are completely out of line but I wouldn't say there's zero merit in that statement. Can you elaborate further? It's possible that this is two-hour sleep clouding my mind but I'm not really sure what this means. And thank you; it will, and I'll migrate here once I...

I'm not sure I agree the characters are completely out of line but I wouldn't say there's zero merit in that statement. Can you elaborate further? It's possible that this is two-hour sleep clouding my mind but I'm not really sure what this means. And thank you; it will, and I'll migrate here once I...

Woah. This guy is pretty cool. Something about your writing style is very interesting to me; I think it's the way you can thoroughly meld your style to the character.

Very well done.

Adjusted my OP to help clear out miscommunication on my part, further advice is welcomed. "What I'm going to do, rather than revise all my characters, is create a single introduction chapter to Act 2 here. In it I will summarize all of the important Act 1 differences from canon, and then the ne...

No, I didn't read anything yet. That's directly related to having to look at a fairly sizable corpus linkdumped on the forums. Considering that there's been some amount of arguing back and forth, and the regrettable results visible in my link, I deemed it fair to point out previous problems to peop...

Probably a good time to point out what I previously asked here . Every single character that isn't named "Hisao" (for he is the only one that actually has initially changed) is exactly the way they are in canon until a different world forces them to react differently. That is the premise ...

Really? I don't think so. If you wrote that fic about Space Hisao who is Meiko's son, then I wouldn't expect you to tell the story all the way back to 2008 where Hisao was frozen in carbonite to keep him alive alongside Meiko who later adopted him... Actually, please forget that train of thought. A...

I've always preferred using comicbook terms myself. A What if? is the same basic universe except something different happened. "What if Hisao didn't show up that day to meet Iwanako?" An Elseworlds is the same basic characters, except ina different time or setting. Hisao is still Hisao, H...

I don't really like any of the alternatives provided as of date so for now I'm probably going to keep it as "Points of Divergence" until I or someone else comes up with something more accurate. 'Parallel Universe Fanfic works.' You have a Hisao who is fundamentally different in the sense ...

Well, do also keep in mind that TVTropes is not an authoritative document. The fact of the matter is that if Hisao, and several past events, have been changed drastically prior to the beginning of the story proper, that's not a point of divergence—there's no single decision or event that causes the...

I agree with Mirage—this is an alternate timeline fic, not a point of divergence fic. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PointOfDivergence http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AlternateTimeline I think the former fits much better. Or even: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Fo...

Hi there, and welcome to these forums. Looks interesting, and the timeline is much appreciated.[1] Generally, however, we do like to see the text over here... :)[2] [1]Thank you! I've been toying with the idea of moving on here for a while, now. [2]I'll start the process probably sometime tomorrow....