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- Thu May 05, 2016 7:13 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 914
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I'm inclined to agree with Oddball. I did enjoy reading it. Your pacing and such is pretty good. But nothing bad ever happens to Hisao, and it just doesn't seem realistic. Also, we know from the VN that he doesn't exactly keel over and die from fucking, even in the Lilly and Shizune routes where he ...