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Back again after a long time... and offering some more montages of mine - hope you like them:)

After getting some of the week's homework out of the way, I took a shower, musing idly whether I might get a new neighbour now Kenji was gone. Well, I would probably notice it if the housing department intended to put someone else in there – after all, they would have to take out the additional lock...

The door to the meeting room had barely closed behind me when I heard Hanako cry out my name. Turning around, I spotted her running towards me with her arms wide open, and just managed to spread out my own arms in time to catch Hanako in a quick embrace. As I did so, I heard several people starting ...

Mutou's kind words and his remark about Hanako's efforts served to keep up my spirits for the rest of the day, which I mostly spent reading. As the dusk crawled in across the school grounds outside, I ate some leftover stew to go with my meds and then decided to go to bed early. Whatever awaited me,...

Ten minutes later, Hanako and I finally managed to escape from the room after enduring lots of additional praise from our classmates. Hanako had only slowly surfaced from my embrace and then stared at the smirking Shizune as if the class rep's inability to speak had suddenly spread to her, which had...

After doing my laundry on Sunday morning, I walked the short way to the girl's dormitory and entered. Ascending the main stairwell, I saw several girls from my class who nodded at me; only Shizune gave me a wary look as I passed her on my way up, but without Misha to voice her curiosity, she was una...

On Friday morning, I woke to the sound of my alarm clock, which I had set to get enough time for my plans. Since I would spend enough time in the hallway kitchen later to fulfil my promise to provide lunch for three people and did not want to spend even more to make breakfast for myself, I ate at th...

On Sunday, I awoke much too early for my taste, rolling around in bed in confusion until I became aware of my surroundings. Seeing the bright sunshine filter through my thin grey curtains, my spirits soared up for a moment – but then I remembered the events of last night, and my mood plunged at the ...

I had originally been told to check in with the head nurse on Monday morning for another check-up, but on Friday, he had sent me a note to come by later in the week unless I had some actual complaints. Since I felt remarkably good after the successful tea-time with the girls, I had some breakfast in...

As I walked down the hallway, I felt my resolution grow stronger with each step. I owed much to Shizune and Misha welcoming me, and being with Emi and Rin was fun, but the time I had spent with Lilly and Hanako had been something else. It sounded strange, but they had touched me in a way the others ...

Thanks again for your answers :) - it feels good to see you guys are interested enough in my story to comment on it so extensively (no sarcasm, honestly). Now about those comments... 1. Writing in script form : While it might seem overly-simplistic (and I'm very capable of writing prose, you're righ...

To address the points you made: 1. First of all, thank you for the quick and extensive feedback :) 2. Like I said at the beginning, I'm experimenting with the usual VN-form of writing here - and I'm very aware that this works much better if you've an avatar of the person talking in front of a backgr...

This part was deleted due to a change in the story structure (see below).

That night, as I was lying in my bed staring at the ceiling, I thought about the last three weeks and the six girls I had befriended during this short timespan. I would have gladly continued spending time with all of them just like before, but now the dance demanded a decision. Which girl should I a...