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by Dash9
Sun Mar 26, 2017 12:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]

Wow Sharp, that's one hell of a return. The chapter came out great! I love the parallel between the first line in the chapter and the author's notes, and yes, we did miss you.

Welcome back,
--Dash
by Dash9
Thu Mar 16, 2017 7:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 4/16!)
Replies: 175
Views: 34803

Re: The Benefit of Hindsight (updated 3/16!)

Well worth the wait.

Welcome back,
--Dash
by Dash9
Mon Dec 26, 2016 2:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 22563

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 7, 7/

Sorry to hear about the lonesome Christmas, but if it results in progress for one of the two active Saki routes...well, thanks.

Good luck
by Dash9
Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)
Replies: 1029
Views: 274720

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 8/9)

No worries on the delay, but many thanks for the update. Good luck at the convention!

--Dash
by Dash9
Thu Jul 14, 2016 6:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Nineteen: Lovers Arcana [14/7/16]

Why did it have to be her? I swear I was joking when I said that after last chapter. But now I know why you didn't respond last time, oops. “Thank god… I thought I was the only one.” So, I had been wondering when this issue was going to show up. I really like the way you wrote it into the story her...
by Dash9
Sat Jul 09, 2016 7:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 22563

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 7, 7/

Glad to see you're back, looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanks for sharing,
--Dash
by Dash9
Wed Jul 06, 2016 1:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Eighteen: Crossed Up [6/7/16]

Argh, my spelling and grammar is going to shit, especially when I'm on my pain meds. Woof. Remember when I made no spelling errors? It happens to the best of us, painkillers or not. I wouldn't worry, catching typos is one of the benefits of posting your story here, right? Besides, I noticed that it...
by Dash9
Tue Jul 05, 2016 11:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Eighteen: Crossed Up [6/7/16]

hand on his friend’s shoulder to reassure you. reassure her feel likeI ran feel like I... y-your not in a sports club? y-you're “What’s Albania like?” Oh my god, Hisao, you dodged a bullet with this one… I laughed, out loud. A lot. Now I'm embarrassed even though I'm in my own house all alone, damm...
by Dash9
Sat Jul 02, 2016 6:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Seventeen: Tag-Out [2/7/16]

to let solo this boss — to let you ----- A curious paper bomb… Waiting to be triggered trigger warning ----- Hisao is going to be one of the toughest fights of his life. be in one ----- two figures walk hand-in-hand and yet, “Huh? What, no, me and ‘Nako aren’t a… thing.” I gotta admit, this is one ...
by Dash9
Sat Jun 25, 2016 11:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki: Fragments (Complete)
Replies: 204
Views: 49732

Re: Miki: Fragments (Complete)

So, after rewriting this message several times, I think I'll just keep it short and simple:
Thank you so much for working so hard to share this story with us!

--Dash
by Dash9
Sat Jun 25, 2016 8:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Sixteen: Rushdown [25/6/16]

I had more swearing in Monomyth certainly but that because I wanted to focus more on them being teenagers than on their disabilities (though I suppose Japanese kids wouldn't do it as much) I was actually referring to her character not the fic. Rika tends to keep it pg-13 (or regional equivalent), e...
by Dash9
Sat Jun 25, 2016 3:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Sixteen: Rushdown [25/6/16]

found a typo...maybe Just… keeping breathing.” He says just keep breathing? See? Yeah, we will do. yeah, will do? 'I’m just worried with the lightning earlier and getting this excited… Could be bad' could end badly? It's probably correct as is, but the sentence structure bugs me for some reason. “So...
by Dash9
Thu Jun 16, 2016 6:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Fifteen: Test Your Might [16/6/16]

Don't worry Sharp, after 15 chapters of great writing and Rika being adorable, we'll be coming back whether you add cliff-hangers or not. Even those who have short attention spans likely won't go anywhere thanks to your rapid release schedule. The only difference is whether I'm glaring at you with f...
by Dash9
Thu Jun 16, 2016 6:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Fifteen: Test Your Might [16/6/16]

FINALLY a post where I'm not about to go to sleep! Thanks Sharp =) His arm relaxes as his other raises it to [] meet his dropping head. ...as his other raises to meet his dropping head? Also, did you mean 'drooping'? Or is it just another instance of my narrow-minded lack of experience with differen...
by Dash9
Thu Jun 09, 2016 1:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flutter - Level Twenty One: Footsies [25/3/17]
Replies: 258
Views: 52828

Re: Flutter - Level Fourteen: New Challenger [8/6/16]

Good chapter, Rika's still adorable.

Damn your cliffhangers!

Gotta get to work (already late, oops) but I'm REALLY looking forward to next time.
As always, thanks for sharing,
--Dash