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by Heartbrokenman
Wed Jun 14, 2017 7:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC short threads
Replies: 2
Views: 699

Re: OC short threads

First of all I suggest you find yourself a proofreader. Punctuation, grammar and formatting could all use some work. So, will those be one shots based on different characters or different one shots based on the same character? Because the story so far is less of a one shot but more of a character i...
by Heartbrokenman
Wed Jun 14, 2017 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC short threads
Replies: 2
Views: 699

OC short threads

I'm back after a long while of being away with my passion of writing back again. Although I'm not perfect nor amazing I hope yo enjoy this one shot OC thread. All these stories will be based around an OC character everyone being different. Feedback is always welcome enjoy! Number 1 – Night sky I ari...
by Heartbrokenman
Wed Nov 25, 2015 7:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3404

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

I'm sorry I have to be the one to say this, but this isn't good. That's not to say you can't improve, because you can, just not by doing this. Please don't take this personally, because I know it can be hard dealing with harsh constructive criticism for the first time. I'm going to list your major ...
by Heartbrokenman
Wed Nov 25, 2015 3:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3404

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Guys all your advice and comments make my day. This whole fanfic page is making my love for KS come alive every word at a time MOVING ON, LETS ROLL! Chapter 3: Mistakes are made A sudden stir from beside me wakes me up but I keep my eye shut wanting to stay in the sweet embrace of slumber. Please do...
by Heartbrokenman
Tue Nov 24, 2015 7:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3404

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Hey guys it's me again. I appreciate all the feedback and support. YOU ARE ALL MY MOTIVATION. LETS GET GOING. Chapter 2: big bad blackout “And that’s why you can’t get oil down to the bottom of a beaker full of water.” Mutou breaks from his monotone rambling much to the classes’ pleasure. The sound ...
by Heartbrokenman
Tue Nov 24, 2015 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3404

Re: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Screw it I'm too excited lets get this ball rolling. Can you face the truth? “A Sammy route” Chapter 1: a new start Green trousers? Check. Smart white shirt? Check. Cock sure grin that covers my nerves? Hell yeah. Eye patch that makes me look more suited on a ship with a bottle of rum and a hearty c...
by Heartbrokenman
Tue Nov 24, 2015 2:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER
Replies: 15
Views: 3404

NEW HANAKO ROUTE KEEP THE LOVE ALIVE OC CHARACTER

Hey my friends, I've got a brand spanking new character to fall in love with Hanako. (say what you want we all love a bit of Hanako) Over the last couple of days I've been thinking about Katawa shoujo so therefore lets keep this fan fiction page alive with brand new stuff for all you big fans out th...