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I still can't understand why I did not think about it. You're right of course, I think I was distracted. Thanks for picking that one up.

Chapter 1: Part 2! (Notes at the end.) I'm not sure whether Hoshiyo accepted my offer because she was interested or out of stress. While nothing like that strange burned girl, Ikezawa, who goes out of her way to hide from others, she seems shy. We have been walking for about 10 minutes now, and no w...

Actually this was more or less the only part of the story that will include such a long monologue. The point was to show how Keiji is when left alone. I realise it must look a little clumsy and heavy, but it is meant to unveil the most basic trait of the main character, which is overthinking and clu...

Act 1 : Your (quite not) usual tenager story Chapter I : Some stones are best left unturned Part 1 : As I look at the familiar gates, I let out a sigh. Those gates always reminded me of why I was here. Of course, Yamaku was a nice place, with nice people, and it really feels like I am alright here,...

Hey y'all! Fairly new to this forum, but already an avid fanfiction reader! I'll be clear, this is my first fanfiction, also the first text I've written for some time, and most of all, english isn't my native language :D. So please point out any of the mistakes, and the clumsy style if need be. To g...

God i can't wait for the update on this. I have read Themocaw's route for Saki first, and this one sheds a new light on it. Good job on the writing too, for something so long to be still as pleasant to read as you go on, it's amazing. Love Chisato and Noriko characters, and also what you've done wit...

Well, the way you build up the story makes it look like it's really thought through, and thus very pleasant to read, also you have some talent setting up characters I guess, since they are all likeable and you seem to put a lot of thought in including them all, wich promises a long and enjoyable rig...

I'm still quite new to this whole fan-fiction thing, although I read quite a lot already. But I can already tell you that this one is just leaving me like a boy waiting for Christmas presents! It's catchy and sets an interesting light on Shizune. I really hope you keep up with this ;) Hell, you migh...

Nice start, that looks really promising :O

This is awesome, keep it up