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by Rogueldr44
Sun Sep 06, 2015 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)
Replies: 8
Views: 1574

Re: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)

I still can't understand why I did not think about it. You're right of course, I think I was distracted. Thanks for picking that one up.
by Rogueldr44
Sat Sep 05, 2015 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)
Replies: 8
Views: 1574

Re: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)

Chapter 1: Part 2! (Notes at the end.) I'm not sure whether Hoshiyo accepted my offer because she was interested or out of stress. While nothing like that strange burned girl, Ikezawa, who goes out of her way to hide from others, she seems shy. We have been walking for about 10 minutes now, and no w...
by Rogueldr44
Fri Sep 04, 2015 8:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)
Replies: 8
Views: 1574

Re: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)

Actually this was more or less the only part of the story that will include such a long monologue. The point was to show how Keiji is when left alone. I realise it must look a little clumsy and heavy, but it is meant to unveil the most basic trait of the main character, which is overthinking and clu...
by Rogueldr44
Fri Sep 04, 2015 12:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)
Replies: 8
Views: 1574

Re: Can you learn to trust? (OCs and other stuff involved)

Act 1 : Your (quite not) usual tenager story Chapter I : Some stones are best left unturned Part 1 : As I look at the familiar gates, I let out a sigh. Those gates always reminded me of why I was here. Of course, Yamaku was a nice place, with nice people, and it really feels like I am alright here,...
by Rogueldr44
Fri Sep 04, 2015 12:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)
Replies: 8
Views: 1574

Can you learn to trust? (Original characters)

Hey y'all! Fairly new to this forum, but already an avid fanfiction reader! I'll be clear, this is my first fanfiction, also the first text I've written for some time, and most of all, english isn't my native language :D. So please point out any of the mistakes, and the clumsy style if need be. To g...
by Rogueldr44
Sat Aug 22, 2015 11:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 10/13)
Replies: 1029
Views: 274574

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New Art 8/19)

God i can't wait for the update on this. I have read Themocaw's route for Saki first, and this one sheds a new light on it. Good job on the writing too, for something so long to be still as pleasant to read as you go on, it's amazing. Love Chisato and Noriko characters, and also what you've done wit...
by Rogueldr44
Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 8, 15/02)
Replies: 75
Views: 22557

Re: Can You Accept Your Fate? - Saki Pseudo Route (Ch. 3, 8/

Well, the way you build up the story makes it look like it's really thought through, and thus very pleasant to read, also you have some talent setting up characters I guess, since they are all likeable and you seem to put a lot of thought in including them all, wich promises a long and enjoyable rig...
by Rogueldr44
Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33791

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 8/17/15]

I'm still quite new to this whole fan-fiction thing, although I read quite a lot already. But I can already tell you that this one is just leaving me like a boy waiting for Christmas presents! It's catchy and sets an interesting light on Shizune. I really hope you keep up with this ;) Hell, you migh...
by Rogueldr44
Mon Aug 17, 2015 7:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)
Replies: 37
Views: 6835

Re: "Can you move past the past?" -- Updated (7/11)

Nice start, that looks really promising :O