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Sharp-O

Just wanted to say I’ve read all of Flutter so far and I love your characters and worldbuilding again! Loving the side oneshots as well, the Saki plot is great and love the sorta alternate universe to Monomyth. Thanks! I always try to keep the characterisations I made in Monomyth consistent through...

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hdkv wrote: ↑Fri May 31, 2024 10:17 pm
Sharp-O wrote: ↑Fri May 31, 2024 5:47 pm
“It’s a pleasure to meet you, Rika. I’ve heard a lot about you.”

Is that name mistake intentional?

It’s what happens when you write two female leads that share three out of four letters in their names Thanks for pointing it out!

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“Is that all I can get for you, Saki?” Yuuko asks, and I nod appreciatively. “That’s great, Yuuko, but my Mom will probably want something when she arrives.” I smile and she does the same, bowing before heading off onto the next table. I pull the worn sleeves of my maroon hooded jacket up my arms a ...

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“Just be careful.” Hisao fusses as I grab hold of the ladder at the edge of the pool and gingerly lower myself into the heated water below. I can’t hide my annoyed look back up at him causing him to look away guiltily. Glad to know he knows he’s smothering me again. I get it; I really do . I’d be th...

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Guide this one to where the traveler never tires, the lover never leaves, the hungry never starve.
Guide this one, Kalahira, and he will be a companion to you as he was to us.

Rest well, Nate. Thank you for everything.

And that was a beautiful story, Vlad. Very well done.

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~ Saki ~ I rap my knuckles against the Nurse’s door a couple times before I hear a voice on the other side call out. “Come in!” I open the door and the Nurse swivels around on his stool to face me, his tired face subtly shifting to a friendlier demeanour. “Well, if it isn’t my favourite patient! Wh...

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“How do you get a squirrel to like you?” I deploy my opening line as I sit down at my desk, my favourite way to start the day. I wait for an answer but it seems like Hanako’s either not biting today or she’s genuinely stumped. I flash her a smile and deliver the punchline. “Act like a nut.” There’s ...

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This is a brilliant story, Vlad!

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Peorth wrote: ↑Fri Mar 01, 2024 11:31 pm
typo.

Fixed! Good looking out!

hdkv wrote: ↑Sat Mar 02, 2024 2:50 am
Looks like both Saki and Rika have a bunch of troubles to take, huh.

It certainly does!

Sharp-O

Well hot damn! What a way to kick off a multi-parter! Excellent and, dare I say, impactful first post! Looking forward to what else you have in store, Seannie!

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“Is this one of those times when I should see the other girl?” I ask with a wince as Saki makes her way towards me. I knew she was in a fight but that looks sore as hell. Her silent, glum expression lightens as she enters my personal space and throws her arms around my neck. Oh. I guess we’re huggin...

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A nice low-key start to a new route, as is the way! The only feedback I can really give is about what we've discussed before with adding commas before characters address each other by name at the end of sentences. For example: “Hey wait up , Nakai! We want to talk to you.” There's one real grammatic...

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“Here’s your new prescription, sweetheart. Make sure Ryo gets it.” Mom says, offering out the slip with all my new medication on it. I bet if Hisao and I compared meds now, we’d match way more… “Thanks, Mom! The Doc will be my first stop once I drop off my stuff.” I take the slip after slinging my b...

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That's such an amazing piece, Euro. I love equana's style!

Totally understand having assets you intend to use but never get round to as well!

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As the previous holder of the "Sentient Typewriter" moniker, I'm more than happy to see another with such a passion for their stories like you, Guthrum. Congrats on completing this saga and I look forward to what you do next!

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