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You were doing so well there until you spelled the last word wrong. :P *Goes and looks* Shangai http://static.tumblr.com/599f5d5e49782cdb8d5cd193ca65b1e4/ry2ekdx/XzJmfewbz/tumblr_static_tumblr_m9cjoqdmwg1r2c83ao3_r1_500.gif *fixes* Overall: good chapter, very emotional. Why did they meet in the cla...

Chapter Fourteen: Three of a Kind Ritsu didn’t break in this morning. Can’t decide if I’m happy about that or not. I slept surprisingly well, but emotional exhaustion will do that. Yesterday’s events weigh heavily on my mind and heart, the malaise making my morning routine unnaturally sluggish and ...

Just like Al, I'm looking forward to seeing the dynamic of this particular duo. Haven't read much about them to be honest so colour me intrigued

Al, Swampie, thank you for your continued support *bows*

Cap, thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you'll enjoy the future updates!

Okay, I somehow managed to miss out on commenting on three other chapters this time. Time to rectify that! I think you were spot on when you compared me to a printing press :lol: It has been mentioned to me that my output might be a tad overwhelming for some people and believe me, I'm not trying to...

I thought it would be a nice little swerve to what could have been a rather boring scene and, because it's in first person, I felt it perfectly reasonable that Taro himself didn't need to identify Miki until he said her name. :) As I established in Taro's monologue, Akio has convinced strangers to b...

It was an intentional misdirect

Chapter Thirteen: Jokers Wild http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa129/Sharp-O/pavilion_zps1jiypgcf.jpg I snatch the bottle of cheap sake out of his hand and pour it out in front of him. “Wha? Hey man, don’t!” “Shut up.” Stay in control. The burning is still there. I hate feeling this angry . “But ...

brythain wrote:The Big Sleeper

It's got a noir feel that I love but is clearly some bizarre reality with it's own unique, scientific lexicon. No set-up just bam! Right into a day-in-the-life story. I dig it.

swampie2 wrote:

Sharp-O wrote:“Tell me why you’re drinking again, Akio.”

Ohh dear.

Oh dear is correct

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Skipped over the H-scene - both because I'm not really interested in those and because it's becoming a bit hard to keep up with this story. The H-scenes, apart from the banter, are the easiest things to write. It's paint by numbers, but with naughty words :lol: Didn't like the chapter about the psy...

Chapter 12: It’s all Fun and Games… Saturday’s lessons are thankfully spent in group work, allowing me to talk to Akio about my trip to the councillor and my plans with Ritsu. He seems to take the former in stride, even offering to talk if I need to. Despite the grief we give each other, he really ...

Oh and I said Roots, not MACH. I made a reference to how likable this series is so far and the speed you're shooting these chapters out, just like Roots. It was told it wasn't gonna be THAT well-liked and they were told to air all the episodes each night for one week (instead of one per week). Need...

Dude, 12 days since the last chapter - you're still one of the fastest writers on the forums, although I think that award may now be bequethed to Sharp-O ( that guy writes like a frickin' printing press ). And I agree with Alpaca: You're still at a good pace with the updates. Sharp-O just doesn't s...