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I really like what you did to bring out the chemistry between two characters who aren't often in the spotlight together (Ever together? I keep finding gems hidden in posts from years ago so who knows what I'll read next ..) I think the smartest pairing in Monomyth (apart from Hanakio because that w...

Shizune absolutely is the best for the job, and it feels like a real tour-de-force for the whole crew to get back and turn the school around. Really strong characterisation of Shizune I didn't want every character from the VN to suddenly become staff so I was very selective in my choices during the...

They’d kept her waiting for over fifteen minutes now. She knew that it was an attempt to unnerve her, to put her on the backfoot. It was a tactic employers would always try to use against her and had always failed. She smiled, adjusting her glasses confidently. Not only was she prepared to a degree ...

He looks away for a moment. sShe didn’t give me a definitive answer.” They kiss, and my heart e stops beating. Those're the only mistakes I spotted so great job to the proof-readers on combing through this 16k epic! Now... I'm a big enough man to say that you've written my favourite Taro. He's a ge...

Never really been a Kenji fan but this is a solid interpretation! Good work!

Feurox wrote: ↑Tue Sep 05, 2023 7:00 pm I think the whole conflict with Saki is difficult to sympathise with Rika, since we haven’t seen her actually be thaaat cruel.

In fairness, Rika's had a year of this shit already and then adding Saki basically threatening to steal her boyfriend is gonna rustle her jimmies something fierce.

Trying to figure out why characters say what their say and do what they do is very much my ‘thing’ (I hear that’s also how some actors get into a role), although it's not to everyone's taste as a writing style -- that and extending a situation to it’s extreme logical conclusion (although I suspect ...

“What the hell was that , Rika!?” Fuuka finally vocalises her concern away from prying ears, in the relative safety of the changing rooms. I try to shake off the blood red pulsing behind my eyes, bracing myself against the wall. “W-what? She h-had it coming.” I croak, swallowing hard. That scream re...

Thank you! It was fun to write - glad you enjoyed it! I really like these kinds of one-shot's that recontextualise KS into a different kind of space. My version of this kind of story is Lost & Found , a future with AI. Speaking of, I've been reading Flutter and very much enjoying it - your styl...

Asoko_Desu wrote: ↑Tue Jun 14, 2022 2:33 pm
Infinitely More Than We Can Ask or Imagine

Oh, I like this. This is my kind of wacky nonsense. Great job, Asoko!

Summer is supposed to be a time of new experiences, not of sitting in my room and studying. While knuckling-down is a new experience for me but it’s definitely not one I’m enjoying so far. I’m so thankful that I know some smart people, otherwise this whole mission of self-improvement would be very s...

Helluva fic, Stealth! You're really putting in the hard yards and it's really paying off!

Feurox wrote: ↑Sun Aug 27, 2023 2:07 pm Nurse continues to amuse ha! Maybe he's a touch cavalier with the idea of them being sexually active,

It's a school full of emotionally vulnerable, hormonally-charged disasters. It's probably easier to be cavalier with the contraceptives than tell them not to fuck each other

A chorus of boys cheering and wolf-whistles fill the air as Hisao and I leave the common area, hand-in-hand. I would usually feel more self-conscious with all the attention but declaring your love for someone kinda makes you feel invincible. Especially when they reciprocate Luckily Akio and his boyf...

I echo a lot of what other people have said; your Rin feels very authentic to the source material and while she's not my favourite character, I do appreciate the love you've shown to keeping her consistent here. I also want to give you props for how your writing style improved over subsequent chapte...