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by Hesmiyu
Mon Dec 31, 2018 7:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 12: Surprise (31/12/2018)

Previous The end of class arrives, and I start to head to my room. I walk across the grounds of Yamaku, and up ahead I see a girl rush out of the main building and run towards the female’s dormitory. I think that was Hanako. I wonder what happened? I decide against following her and carry on toward...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Dec 31, 2018 7:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 12: Surprise (31/12/2018)

A new chapter, just in time for the new year. The schedule is very sporadic due to having plans for other, non fanfiction stories and stuff happening in real life. I hope you enjoy this chapter. :) This one contains 7.7k words. Chapter 12: Surprise *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** After going back to my roo...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Oct 09, 2018 3:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
Replies: 6
Views: 1147

Re: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit

It's fine. I'm sure quite a few native English speakers, such as my self, have issues with the English SPaG when writing.
by Hesmiyu
Thu Sep 20, 2018 11:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion
Replies: 51
Views: 5216

Re: A Butterfly Dream - Iwanako/Hisao Inversion

There's one more possibility I'm including from my head-canon, compatible with your position. The location of Yamaku (which literally means 'mountain ward', or 'civic area on the mountain') is likely on the slope of Mount Aoba. That would mean that if you built part of the school against the hill, ...
by Hesmiyu
Fri Sep 14, 2018 10:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)

Ooo now that should be good. I also the Nurse stands out out as being an actual medical professional that works well with high school students and not just window dressing or one liners. Have a good one and I'll keep any eye out for updates. :D Long wait for a response cough . It is amazing what st...
by Hesmiyu
Thu Sep 13, 2018 3:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
Replies: 49
Views: 3067

Re: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition

We only get to see what you write down. It is possible that his Japanese is imperfect in your head, but if you want to get that across to your readers you have to put in some effort. And to get imperfect language across is hard enough if the text is written in the language they are supposed to be s...
by Hesmiyu
Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition
Replies: 49
Views: 3067

Re: Unforeseen Consequences, Katawa Shoujo Forums Edition

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Thu Sep 06, 2018 11:11 am
and was spelled out in hentaigana.
In what??? :lol:
I looked it up and it is a real thing. C. 800 - 1900 CE

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hentaigana
by Hesmiyu
Sun Aug 26, 2018 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hesmiyu's Extras - Watcher In The Snow - 2018/08/26
Replies: 7
Views: 2264

Hesmiyu's Extras - The Watcher In The Snow

To be honest, I have no idea what inspired me to write this fic but it actually took longer to edit it than to write. This is set before the Last Time The Watcher In The Snow The snow beneath my feet rustles as I step through. It is quite a nice sound, crushing something and there being no consequen...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Aug 20, 2018 8:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)

Great couple of chapters! I finally took the time to catch up on your story and I really love your characters and how easily they fit into the world of KS. I did notice two things in the last chapter. "I hear Masahiro’s voice on my left ask me if I’m all right. I look at him and see he has his hand...
by Hesmiyu
Mon Jul 30, 2018 4:26 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 3043

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

Looking up when Marine day would have been in 2007, it would have been the 23rd July, the third Monday of July which would put the 3-day weekend between 21st-23rd. On yours you have it the week prior. Is that due to the game? Everything I've looked at has pointed toward 16 July. What's your source ...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Jul 28, 2018 6:09 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Consolidated Calendar of Events
Replies: 20
Views: 3043

Re: Consolidated Calendar of Events

Looking up when Marine day would have been in 2007, it would have been the 23rd July, the third Monday of July which would put the 3-day weekend between 21st-23rd. On yours you have it the week prior. Is that due to the game?
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up- Part 3 (24/07/2018)

Previous Post *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** Running late seems to be my theme for the day, I blame my diary for that. First running late for swimming - which Akemi seemed to be concerned about until I managed to calm her - and now I am running a few minutes late for my homeroom. I am concerned that she ...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up - Part 2 (24/07/2018)

Previous Post *** Ryuunosuke’s PoV *** The annoying tone of my alarm wakes me up, and I manage to turn it off with one swoop of my arm. I sit up and rub my eyes, feeling the suture scar around my bad eye as I do so. As I look around my room, my good eye is drawn to the time on the alarm clock. Eith...
by Hesmiyu
Tue Jul 24, 2018 12:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up (24/07/2018)
Replies: 48
Views: 12333

Re: Swim Story [OC] - Chapter 11: Wake Up - Part 1 (18/07/2018)

Whats this? A new chapter after a year? :O As stated in my previous post, I had gotten distracted. What I hadn't stated what that my drive for the story had subsided due to lack of response. Here is chapter 11 with 11.9k words. ---- Chapter 11: Wake Up I enter my homeroom, my head now thankfully onl...
by Hesmiyu
Sat Jul 14, 2018 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?
Replies: 14
Views: 3102

Re: Yuuko Pseudo-route: Can You Read Me?

I came across this while I was thinking about odd pairings (I am trawling the forums to read all fics) and had noticed a lack of Yuuko ones. Keep up the good work.