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Nice chapter once again. I was confused as well by what actually happened in the pool, but I guess thats the perils of writing while drugged. :) Hope you're feeling better. Thanks Gaj! I'm actually not feeling any better but, at the very least, I'm getting a sense of what it's like to be Natsume da...

*Akemi’s P.O.V* I wheel myself away from the auxiliary building and towards the girls’ dorms. On my way, I push on the bars on my wheels to make myself go faster before I let it coast for quite a bit further than normal. I see the ramp I need to go up quickly approaching. I try to gain speed with my...

Initially it threw me that there were no names, other than Hikari's, but by the end I felt like it fit. I like there was just enough information to determine the other 4, but not too much information.

Sharp-O wrote:The original Monomyth thread has been updated with everything bar this.

Counted them all including this one and I think you've published the equivalent of 79 chapters. Well done .

Sharp-O wrote:So many plans.

That sounds ominous. I'm ready to read what you write .

I actually didn't get a dark vibe strangely enough, maybe that is because I've read darker fics.

Alpacalypse wrote:

Hesmiyu wrote:Hisao/Shizune aren't married yet

Hisao died after getting shot in the chest with a t-shirt cannon, remember?

I had actually forgotten that.

When I reread the universe, I read the Monomyth, then this one followed by the future one right?

Mirage_GSM wrote:-snip-

Personally, I don't believe ending a story when every single character is happily married, has seven kids, won the lottery and singlehandedly cured cancer and achieved world peace is a good idea...[/quote]

Same, but who knows what goes on in Sharp-O's story telling mind

3 stories completed within your Monomyth universe, well done on the quality. I don't think you're truly done with this universe seeing as 2 of the couples aren't together and Hisao/Shizune aren't married yet (if I read this right) .

Good luck on your future writings

Ooo a Hanako story where Hanako is the Main Character :D. When you described Miss Moto I thought it was Lilly too. Due to distraction after reading description, I kept wondering why 'Lilly' was wearing glasses :P. Part of me thinks the description of Moto was put like that on purpose :P. Good job so...

Current Chapter Word Count: 5,482 Chapter 1-4 Word Count: 17,717 ---------- Act 1, Chapter 4: The Swimming Pool [/size] While walking along the main corridor inside the male dormitory, I get the feeling that it has somehow gotten longer, even though I was here less than an hour ago. I reach my door,...

Alpacalypse wrote:One small thing:

Sharp-O wrote:I don’t think Miki m-meant it

Wasn't it Lilly who was making the threats?

If I got it right, Lilly is making the current threat and we are told Miki made the one mentioned beforehand. That's my interpretation.

Sharp-O wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote:That's your storytelling as we all know and love it

Rambling?

More like so many good and relevant ideas

No longer lurking on this . I like this story and will read each updated chapter when it comes out .

There were two spots in it where two words were missing a space. I would copy them but I'm on my mobile phone so it's a lot harder to.

Seeing that title card makes me think something bad is going to happen. Even if it does, in sure you'll write it beautifully like you have all the previous chapters. I'm curious to see how you will do the Epilogue (Saki-logue?), as in having Hisao researching a way to help her medically as write a f...