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It was great! Now you explain the name it makes sense, at first I thought it was Rin's idea of a good name. :lol: Well Im very relieved to hear it since my sad stuff is a little rusty overall. I feel like Rin would be the japanese equivalent of some of our US celebrities that name their kids things...

The clouds gathered ominously around the cemetery, broken by the fading shafts of daylight. [/size] THRILLER, THRILLER NIGHT ♪~ Ran [/size] Rin? Mom quietly picked herself off the ground and turned to hug Ran, lifting her feet off of the ground. [/size] What a twist! Very nice, sad, but that's what...

Well, its been awhile since I wrote something, and Ive been itching to get something more sad on paper. Combine that with thinking about Lilly again and you've got a very sad stew going. Im sure its been done before and will be done many times after I'm gone, but there is my take on a well worn ide...

and this is the longest you’ve had a relationship since that Iwanako girl.” That bar's not hung very high :-) Your father heard that the cherry blossoms in Hokkaido are blooming early this year with all the warm weather this year, Would be VERY early... Hanami in Hokkaido is usually end of April/ea...

Sorry for the delay, but I had a rather busy week. Here is the next chapter! (Daylight)[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zzCJASxRdTQ] “Sorry Emi, but I’m going to have to pass.” I think for a second before realizing Emi’s persistence won’t stop there. “I already promised Hanako that I’d spend some ti...

Rin looked at her curiously. “You’re an interesting cherry-blossom colour. I’m sitting with Hisao. I need to tell him about his tackle. And also, that Emi’s not coming. Her legs have got infected from running with wet stumps or something.” Well, some things never change. Poor Emi: gets tossed in a ...

So... One question: WHEN is this story supposed to take place? Every chapter I read seems to contradict the last: Is this set directly after Hanako's good end? Because at times they seem to assume that nobody noticed they are together yet. Is it set shortly before the summer holidays? Because Lilly...

This is a tough choice. Either way, this could get ugly: You try to invite Hanako and I can see her saying no and Hisao confronting her about her lie in the typical "It was this moment, Hisao knew he fucked up" way. You don't bother her about it and who knows what else she brews up to cre...

Hey folks, since Dwarf isnt quite feeling well, I am posting his section for him today. Based on your responses to the poll, the majority of you selected choice B. Like last time, please vote on the strawpoll for your vote to count. We hope you enjoy! Cherry Blossoms Part 3 By Dwarf Innocence: https...

I have some suggestions on your process... I have many of the same problems with editing. 1. Lose the schedule. Any material presented anywhere for any purpose suffers (sometimes editorially - sometimes in quality and plot too) when a schedule becomes an important consideration. 2. Editing your own...

Sorry for getting back to you so late, but I had neglected to check the posts. I agree about the writing - The beginning of the second section stay in past tense a bit too long but otherwise no glaring mistakes. I'll keep that in mind. When I read through it for proofreading, I didnt notice much the...

Interested, and voted. This could go one of two ways, and I don't think I need to explain why. Technically, I found it to be pretty good. Nothing too glaring that made me want to tear my hair out, so that's good. Good to hear that my writing isnt the primary cause of your baldness! But seriously, g...

To avoid problems, we are moving to strawpoll, as suggested. I apologize on behalf of my team for any problems we caused, and I hope that it didnt prevent you from enjoying the piece!

So, this is a new project where I am collaborating with a bunch of other talented writers to create a hopefully immersive story similar in style to KS, but also incorporating the impactful choices. At the end of each piece, we are going to allow you, the community, to help decide where we take the s...

A Crucible of Love By Michael A. Goldberg A dash, a fall, a broken heart off-beat A plead to stay to sweep the blind girl’s feet A veil of dark, a failure to connect He reaped the fruit of ill conceived neglect A blip, a beep, an arithmetic sound A signal that the boy was still around A sigh implied...