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eight grand-worth of student debt I'm not sure what things are like in Japan but I need to get over there. Three years studying a bachelor's degree in music is costing me almost 30k, letalone a PHD. :lol: Hell, you could show up in nothing but a Union Jack and you’d still look great! God save our g...

Akio chuckles as he reads the message from Hisao.

He lives!

Shizune in the snow.

Sharp, you spoil me.

The writing her is great, and the swap to third person really added to it. Great job!

This Hanako reminds me of Bakemonogatari's Shinobu Oshino, I'm half surprised you didn't throw a janky neck angle in there for that Shaft authenticity. Makes me want to write a crossover. :lol: Nice little piece, but it makes me wonder who she was feeding off before and if her bites have any consequ...

“Your lighter than you think, plus you quite cute when you sleep.” You're not your . 'You're' means 'you are' while 'your' would be used like 'how is your orange juice?' This should read: ' You're lighter than you think, plus you're quite cute when you sleep.' Some other errors here and there, but ...

Right off the bat this chapter is much higher quality than the first, great job. There were a couple errors here and there, but nothing un-readable in the slightest.

Mutou thinking he’s as exciting as a dog on a motorbike

Wahaha! That caught me off guard, fantastic.

I went into this thinking it was from Misha's perspective, so the flip was a surprise.

Very nice piece!

However I'm starting to worry that the fan base is dying. SO PLEASE KEEP IT ALIVE. That's bound to happen 1421 days after release. :lol: In regards to your story, get yourself a proofreader. There we a couple instances of weird grammar: “Hey are you leaving I was hoping you could help me?” Should b...

As the others have said, it's sad this story has come to a close so soon. I still enjoyed it every step of the way, though!

I look forward to whatever you cook up next sharp!

I also found Akira and Hikari in RELife, made me smile when I saw this frame.

Hokkaido: a Turning Point

a little Hokkaido story, yaay!

Oh.

Ohh...

I think you did a great job of capturing that feeling, great job!

TheDwarfLard wrote:Haneko~

Well that was just adorable, great job!

Pretty cute! The interaction between Emi and Rin is kind of what I had in mind for an alternate mirror-shoujo kind of deal. Thanks! I did a lot of re-writing to get it just right. I liked the detail of the more refined painting too. Good work, Swamp :lol: I spent far too much time putting silly thi...

So, did Hisao and Iwanako get together in this universe? He seems to be a lot more open about the whole thing. I dunno *shrug*. However, from the sounds of it, it seems that Meiko's a meanie in this universe. Not so great then. I'll be interested to see how this plays out. The next chapter will hol...

"We're lucky we were already on the ground floor." I chuckle as I allow Suzu to slip from my back and onto the small bench before leaning her forward onto her bag. "Sorry again." He sighs, his expression a picture of sheepishness. "To be honest I think she was about to pass ...

Well I just got done with MonMusu... It was okay(?)

But this fic. This fic is how you do that right. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the next part!

Sharp-O wrote:The more I write, the more I find myself repeating phrases and using the same idioms...

I do this so much.

'I x before x' and 'I chuckle / I retort' always seem to pop up.