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by ChaosSummons01
Sun May 22, 2016 8:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)

Nice to see this story continue. Good job with making Yuuko not as over the top as some other stories (and the VN). One thing I've come to dislike is the cliché of the cafetreria having such bad food. It comes up in many VNs, but here it sticks out precisely because you avoid a lot of other common ...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-5: Monday Blues Monday. The day after my city trip with Miki and honestly not one I’ve been looking forward to. For one thing, it’s Monday, the day after the weekend, knowing you’ve got a full week of learning before you get another break. Sure I don’t have lessons today, but the dread is sti...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-4: The Hustle and Bustle My Saturday went about as well as I expected. As in I did absolutely nothing. I didn’t exactly expect much, but to say I wasn’t bored out of my mind would be such an understatement that even saying I’m fine about what happened with Hanako would seem more honest. I sat...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-3: The Stem Through the rest of the week, things remained normal for me, if a bit hard to get used to. With Lilly on her holiday until this evening and Hanako still having not come back to classes, as well as still freaking out about if I should try to talk to her, I’ve had to entertain mysel...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-2: A Night on the Town Lessons went by without too much issue, I still looked back at Hanako’s desk probably way too much, but like I thought she didn’t come to the lessons that day. That being said, I now have something to look forward to, rather than fearing just what my mind will come up w...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-1: Torn Petals The alarm cuts through the deafening silence of my dorm room like a knife through butter, telling me it’s time for another day of lessons. What it doesn’t do, however, is awaken me. I've not slept at all. My mind has been racing from the events of yesterday evening and hasn’t s...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Re: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route

Act 2-0: Misstep I become increasingly desperate as Hanako becomes more and more blunt towards me. “Come on, you don’t have to be like that. I just want to spend some time with you. Lilly and I are worried, so…” Hanako looks up at me, if only briefly with look of surprise on her face, mixed with an...
by ChaosSummons01
Sat May 21, 2016 7:20 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)
Replies: 14
Views: 9772

Petals in the Wind - A Miki Pseudo Route (Updated 05/21)

SURPRISE BITCH, I BET YOU THOUGHT YOU'D SEEN THE LAST OF ME! Aaa, man it's been a long while hasn't it? For those who don't know, around a year ago I started a fanfic called Petals in the Wind. Unfortunately, my motivation died and along with college work, I simply couldn't continue at the time. We...
by ChaosSummons01
Mon Jun 08, 2015 5:25 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Katawa DLCs
Replies: 291
Views: 381284

Re: Katawa DLCs

Psycho Katawa Pass DLC: Ever wandered what Yamaku would be like if the Sibyl system was implimented? Well wait no longer! Watch as people from Yamaku slowly get taken away because of their issues and problems! Have a girl you like? Better keep her hue clear or it's the asylum for them and you! Free...
by ChaosSummons01
Mon Jun 08, 2015 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 341803

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14

Awh, I finally get around to reading this thread and then I find out it's not being updated anymore :(