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Ha, I was wondering when the Looking-Glass would appear. It's an excellent psychological Rin I'm reading here. Good job. Although I do think she has a finer sense of colour, which is a minor quibble. I realised that I completely forgot to reply. I'm glad to hear I'm getting the characterisation rig...

The Destruction of the Self The hard, dusty feel of the atelier floor was the first sensation to return to Rin. She lay on her front, her face tilted down and to the side. There was something odd about that, as she seemed to remember toppling backward as her paintbrush dropped to the ground. Maybe ...

I just wanted to say that you have a really good, really entertaining handle on Shizune. Your characterisation, particularly in that first chapter but also in the second, really stands out. Your writing seems to flow naturally and makes for easy reading also. I have to admit I'm a bit envious of it....

Thank you all for the warm feedback, and I'm definitely happy to have garnered such a positive response to my writing! You guys have certainly given me a lot to think about. Unfortunately I didn't get a lot of sleep last night and I don't want to start discussing the characters too closely, but I di...

Thanks for the feedback guys, and thank you for the welcome! I'll try not to make trouble. I can certainly live with above average, especially since it's been years since I put pen to paper. Or in this case, finger to keyboard. Depressing the audience is something I've got some experience with, now ...

I liked this. Rin in a nutshell.

Major spoiler warning. (Rin Chapter 3) Prologue: On the Other Side of Shattered Glass Rin stood alone in the middle of the atelier. Hisao wasn’t up yet, for which she was… thankful? Thankful because she didn’t have to deal with the confusing and painful feelings that swirled within her chest? Feelin...