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by Razoredge
Sun Oct 17, 2021 7:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/10/2021)
Replies: 51
Views: 14082

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/10/2021)

After reading this scene, I hate Hisao's mother less, even if I still don't like her that much, given her views about her son's relationships. I know parents can't always agree with their children's relationships, but being so disapproving about it is something I can't even understand, and I don't l...
by Razoredge
Tue Aug 24, 2021 1:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 449353

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210823 An Apology to the Nurse)

As you said, it was short. But for this kind of absurd content, short shots are good, really good. It was pretty good, in my opinion, a nice change with the canon personality of Hisao. This is the most Kenji-ish Hisao I ever read since I joined this forum, and it was pretty well made. The absurdity ...
by Razoredge
Mon Aug 16, 2021 11:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/21)
Replies: 31
Views: 8158

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/21)

Another excellent piece. You managed to make me like Rin (No, I won't cease to thank you for that), and on this one, you managed to make me hate Lilly, that's an excellent work, you can be proud of yourself. Now, talking about this chapter in particular, I have a really bad feeling about what will h...
by Razoredge
Tue Jul 20, 2021 10:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 449353

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210719 Kotani's Agency for finding things)

To be fair, I'm kinda picky when it comes to detective stories. But this one was an enjoyable reading so far. The slice of life elements and the general mood helped a lot, I have to say. I really don't mind if the OC is a self-insert, or if the writer has put a lot of himself/herself in the characte...
by Razoredge
Thu Jul 15, 2021 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 4
Views: 1356

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route - I-2 added 07/15/2021

Rainfall The rain sweeping against the window wakes me up a few minutes before my alarm-clock. Opening the curtains, the terrible weather makes me sigh. My second day at school, and it’s already raining, great. Sitting on my bed, I swallow my army of pills with a bit of water, mindlessly, before pu...
by Razoredge
Wed Jul 07, 2021 12:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 449353

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210628 Hisao & Akira Avoid The Family)

I... wasn't ready for that. I expected litterally ANYTHING but that. It's a very well-written piece, and I didn't expect anything else from FluffandCrunch. The last lines are pretty well done, and it got me, I didn't expect that, to be honest. That was a very well done turn of events, and I have to ...
by Razoredge
Thu Jun 17, 2021 7:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/10/2021)
Replies: 51
Views: 14082

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/6/2021)

Another pleasant reading, a long one yes, but it was very pleasant. I really like the light at the end of the chapter. I don't know what you planned for the other chapters, but I really like what you did on this one. That amount of hope you give to them after what they went through in the previous c...
by Razoredge
Sat Jun 12, 2021 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot
Replies: 5
Views: 752

Re: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot

I kinda like it, to be honest. A whole twist in the canon can be pretty good, or it can be pretty bad, depending of the writer. But here, I kinda like it, the changes can feel pretty tropey, but for me it works, even if I'm not usually a fan of "x is evil now". So yeah, for me it kinda works. It wou...
by Razoredge
Thu Jun 03, 2021 12:32 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Some advice for my first playtrough?
Replies: 2
Views: 476

Re: Some advice for my first playtrough?

One advice: Do a blind playthrough, take the choices you really want to take, and see where you're going. Blind playthroughs for first runs are, IMO, the best option.
by Razoredge
Sun May 16, 2021 6:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/21)
Replies: 31
Views: 8158

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)

Another great chapter, my pal. Even if you shared a little part of it some time ago on Discord, it was a really pleasant reading. What Akira told to Hisao was a nice thing to add on this chapter, I have to say, and I really can't wait to read the others. I really hope their relationship will last lo...
by Razoredge
Thu May 13, 2021 11:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210920 Writings of AA)
Replies: 1929
Views: 449353

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)

For the last entry, what I see is a wasted potential. Wasted in the meaning where we won't be able to see the end. I like Molly, she's a cute character, and when I see a writing about Molly, I'm always happy, because I really think she deserves more love and attention. The premise was extremely inte...
by Razoredge
Sun Apr 18, 2021 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-12 added 19-04-2021
Replies: 55
Views: 18295

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-12 added 19-04-2021

When I see your face I rise to the surface for some air, as I almost choke on water. I was thinking about something else, and I stayed too much underwater, which was a dumb idea. Arms on the edge of the swimming pool, I breathe deeply a few times to calm my heart. One of my swimming partners comes ...
by Razoredge
Sat Apr 17, 2021 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 116
Views: 43467

Re: I post things here occassionally.

Really cute Rin, indeed. I love it.
by Razoredge
Fri Apr 16, 2021 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/8/21)
Replies: 31
Views: 8158

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 14/4/21)

I have a feeling of deja-vu for a specific scene of this chapter. But the good kind. I love how you "rewrote" this particular scene, I would say it feels way better in your chapter. This feels like a good ending for the first act, maybe because I was expecting something painful. Yeah, I was expectin...
by Razoredge
Mon Apr 12, 2021 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 116
Views: 43467

Re: I post things here occassionally.

Damn, this Lilly looks so cute, I love it.