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by Razoredge
Sat Jun 12, 2021 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot
Replies: 4
Views: 201

Re: Evil Iwanako, a short one-shot

I kinda like it, to be honest. A whole twist in the canon can be pretty good, or it can be pretty bad, depending of the writer. But here, I kinda like it, the changes can feel pretty tropey, but for me it works, even if I'm not usually a fan of "x is evil now". So yeah, for me it kinda works. It wou...
by Razoredge
Thu Jun 03, 2021 12:32 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Some advice for my first playtrough?
Replies: 2
Views: 72

Re: Some advice for my first playtrough?

One advice: Do a blind playthrough, take the choices you really want to take, and see where you're going. Blind playthroughs for first runs are, IMO, the best option.
by Razoredge
Sun May 16, 2021 6:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)
Replies: 27
Views: 5696

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)

Another great chapter, my pal. Even if you shared a little part of it some time ago on Discord, it was a really pleasant reading. What Akira told to Hisao was a nice thing to add on this chapter, I have to say, and I really can't wait to read the others. I really hope their relationship will last lo...
by Razoredge
Thu May 13, 2021 11:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 400065

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)

For the last entry, what I see is a wasted potential. Wasted in the meaning where we won't be able to see the end. I like Molly, she's a cute character, and when I see a writing about Molly, I'm always happy, because I really think she deserves more love and attention. The premise was extremely inte...
by Razoredge
Sun Apr 18, 2021 7:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-12 added 19-04-2021
Replies: 55
Views: 15841

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-12 added 19-04-2021

When I see your face I rise to the surface for some air, as I almost choke on water. I was thinking about something else, and I stayed too much underwater, which was a dumb idea. Arms on the edge of the swimming pool, I breathe deeply a few times to calm my heart. One of my swimming partners comes ...
by Razoredge
Sat Apr 17, 2021 10:08 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 116
Views: 39040

Re: I post things here occassionally.

Really cute Rin, indeed. I love it.
by Razoredge
Fri Apr 16, 2021 2:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)
Replies: 27
Views: 5696

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 14/4/21)

I have a feeling of deja-vu for a specific scene of this chapter. But the good kind. I love how you "rewrote" this particular scene, I would say it feels way better in your chapter. This feels like a good ending for the first act, maybe because I was expecting something painful. Yeah, I was expectin...
by Razoredge
Mon Apr 12, 2021 11:46 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: I post things here occassionally.
Replies: 116
Views: 39040

Re: I post things here occassionally.

Damn, this Lilly looks so cute, I love it.
by Razoredge
Thu Apr 01, 2021 8:03 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Who was your first Katawa Shoujo Girl?
Replies: 21
Views: 1082

Re: Who was your first Katawa Shoujo Girl?

The first girl I got was Emi, like a lot of people. I think that a lot of people get Emi first since her route is the easiest to get. Then, I get Lilly, Hanako, Rin and Shizune, in that order. I'm not a sports-like person, but I kinda like Emi's personality. But I don't think it would be a good matc...
by Razoredge
Sat Mar 27, 2021 3:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scarred Muse
Replies: 15
Views: 2422

Re: Scarred Muse

As I told you on Discord, this is a strange pairing, but also a very pleasant one. Even if it's strange, it kinda works, I'm amazed, to be honest. The whole thing was extremely cute, I love it, and it comes from someone who wasn't a Rin fan at all (now I kinda like her). I really love your writing s...
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 19, 2021 9:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)
Replies: 31
Views: 8020

Re: Switching Dynamics - A Ritsu Pseudo-Route (Properly)

**Pretends to discover the chapter** This is a good chapter, I have to say. I'll look your music mistakes for the next chapters :twisted: But this is a good chapter, as I told you, and I wonder what Hisao would give to the band with his current level, there is a good perspective of evolution for him...
by Razoredge
Mon Mar 15, 2021 9:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/3/2021)
Replies: 43
Views: 10716

Re: Rin Epilogue: The Long Road (Updated 15/3/2021)

The only thing I want to do now is to shake both Hisao and Rin, and yell at them to stop acting like that, talking to each other frankly, and recover from this situation. Situations like that are not good for anyone, and, given the turn of events, I'm not even sure if they want to recover from this ...
by Razoredge
Mon Mar 08, 2021 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210503 From Tokyo To Mumbai)
Replies: 1914
Views: 400065

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20210308 Ungraceful Reunion)

The only complain I have about it is its unfinished character. I really want to know the developments, but I think we won't have the end of the story, which is quite a shame. It started great, I really like stories like this one that deal about "a few years later" events, it offers a lot of possibil...
by Razoredge
Thu Feb 18, 2021 11:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route
Replies: 21
Views: 1762

Re: God's Gift to Yamaku - An OC-centric Pseudo-Route

So, for the first chapter, there are two things I would "complain" about. I'm not a huge fan of the "I rewrite the VN" but at least, you manage to add more original content in the chapter. Also, I don't understand what's the point to add the choices from the game, directly in your chapters. Adding c...
by Razoredge
Sun Feb 14, 2021 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 15/5/21)
Replies: 27
Views: 5696

Re: Running Away To You (A Post Lilly-Neutral Story) (Updated 14/2/21)

The only thing I need to say is : They need to stay together. They need it. Your writing, buddy, is, as always, very good. Knowing that Akira will leave when Hisao told her she loves her, and she basically told him the same thing, just make me curious about how the situation would be resolved. About...