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by Razoredge
Fri Jan 22, 2021 11:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 3
Views: 263

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route

Thanks Odd. I took the risk but I was worried, thinking it would seem forced. I never did something like that, and I'm glad you potentially liked this first try. Writing a Saki's path will be difficult, but I'm proud of trying new things, and I hope you'll like my vision of her.
by Razoredge
Fri Jan 22, 2021 2:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 01/03/2021
Replies: 8
Views: 1330

Re: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 01/03/2021

Thanks, Odd, for your reply. I understand your point of view about everything, and I hope the following chapters will erase some doubts you may have. I'm taking my time to avoid mistakes as much as possible, but, indeed, some things has to be modified. Every review helps me, and I take everything in...
by Razoredge
Fri Jan 08, 2021 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 1/8/21)
Replies: 34
Views: 10468

Re: Flowers Before the Fireflies - A Miki Pseudo-route (Updated 12/10/19)

Welcome back Pablo. You don't have to justify yourself, everyone has their own problems, and it can impact their writing. So, don't feel bad about it, it's still good to see people come back to the forum. I really liked your chapter, especially the last part. The fact that Hisao wants to be kind wit...
by Razoredge
Thu Jan 07, 2021 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 3
Views: 263

Re: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route - Act I-I added 01/08/2021

Act I: Adagio Ouverture This scene takes place on Tuesday, during most of the smalltalk scene Waking up in an unfamiliar room is a jarring feeling. This is the third room this year that I’m supposed to call ‘mine’, but I feel like a complete stranger here. My bags are against the wall, my medicatio...
by Razoredge
Thu Jan 07, 2021 7:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route
Replies: 3
Views: 263

Lullaby of an open heart - A Saki pseudo-route

When the April Fools Joke was released, I was in love with Saki and Rika, but especially Saki. I refused to admit that Saki would stay a joke, this character had so much potential, and her design was lovely. As the years passed, Saki simply became my favorite "non-existent" character, all fandoms in...
by Razoredge
Tue Jan 05, 2021 7:08 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay
Replies: 33
Views: 1263

Re: Post-PhD, I spent a year writing this 60,000 word KS Essay

This is one of the best thing I've ever read about the game, so I just have to say: Thank you. This was both passionate and analytic, as everything about a game should be. I really liked reading this essay, and this is one of the best things I've ever read about a game. Thank you so much.
by Razoredge
Sun Jan 03, 2021 12:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 01/03/2021
Replies: 8
Views: 1330

Re: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 01/03/2021

Thanks Brythain, I appreciate it.
At first glance, I wasn't aware of the play on words in the title, but it can work, yes XD
by Razoredge
Sat Jan 02, 2021 8:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 01/03/2021
Replies: 8
Views: 1330

Re: Sakura Blossom - A way with Hisao - Act I-I added 10/03/2021

Act I : Acceptance Distance It’s three in the morning, Mom wakes me up by stroking my hair, and tells me we’ll leave in half an hour. Today, I’m going to my new school, it is both exciting and frightening. My parents have prepared me for my new life, but I’m still afraid because this is happening t...
by Razoredge
Sat Jan 02, 2021 12:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210125 A Runner's Afternoon)
Replies: 1898
Views: 350613

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20201207 The Ooe Way—A Natsume Fic)

This was so cute. I love pieces like that, about the characters childhood. Some sisters action is what I needed, I don't even know why, but I needed it. This was wonderfully made, you did a really great job. Thanks for that, really, I mean it. It was great.
by Razoredge
Fri Jan 01, 2021 12:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection
Replies: 36
Views: 2251

Re: Secret Santa 2020 - Story collection

Our pal Brister already knows what I think about his story, it's wonderful, I really liked it, it was funny and filled with emotions, he did a really good job. The judgment lines in the dialogues are gems, litteraly. You have a think for dialogues, buddy, I'm pretty jealous about that. But, seeing s...
by Razoredge
Mon Dec 28, 2020 12:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 1/2/2020)
Replies: 48
Views: 7398

Re: Sweetest Requiem - A Saki Pseudo-Route (Updated 1/2/2020)

Hi there, You don't have to justify yourself, we can understand what happens, and no one will blame you for that. Concerning your thoughts about changing your route or carry on that way, the only thing I have to say is : Do what you want. You're the only master of your fate, and you have to do what ...
by Razoredge
Sat Dec 12, 2020 11:55 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Spinocerebellar Ataxia
Replies: 5
Views: 320

Re: Spinocerebellar Ataxia

Oh fuck, this will destroy everything I would have planned for her for a future FF.

(Joke asides: If this thing becomes real, it will be a wonderful news)
by Razoredge
Sun Dec 06, 2020 11:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20210125 A Runner's Afternoon)
Replies: 1898
Views: 350613

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20201207 The Ooe Way—A Natsume Fic)

When I see a Natsume fic, I'm happy. I'm not very fond of the writing, I have to say, but so far, it's not too shabby. It's a bit forced, yeah, a bit akward too, and yes, writing an article about the new student would be really akward. That being said, that was quite a fun read. Waaaaaaay better tha...
by Razoredge
Thu Nov 26, 2020 1:34 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which song moved you the most?
Replies: 145
Views: 38651

Re: Which song moved you the most?

Best song from the OST, period.
by Razoredge
Thu Nov 26, 2020 10:58 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which song moved you the most?
Replies: 145
Views: 38651

Re: Which song moved you the most?

Concord on a positive side, this song is wonderful.

On a more negative side, Moment of Decision and Cold Iron....