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by Razoredge
Sun Apr 21, 2019 2:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1502

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019

Checkmate The water is like a mirror. On the diving board, I look at my body's reflection. Curves are waving, it's pretty funny. But I'm here to swim. I take a huge breath, and I dive. It seems that water is pretty cold today, but it's okay. I start swimming. I'm nearly alone, I woke up earlier thi...
by Razoredge
Thu Apr 04, 2019 3:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1502

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-6 added 04-03-2019

Thanks for your words. I try to do everything I can to improve my writings and deleting all the gaps, it's pretty hard, because English is not my mother tongue.
by Razoredge
Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:43 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4852
Views: 356040

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

The blind one is the one I am the closest to. I told her a lot of things before, without handler her with kid gloves, and she always appreciated my honesty. So, I think she'll understand what I want to say to her, Maybe she'll have a sulk for a while, but she will realize this thing. For this dumbas...
by Razoredge
Wed Apr 03, 2019 8:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1502

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-6 added 04-03-2019

Kind invitation In the dead of night, a nightmare wakes me with a start. This is the same nightmare every time. I'm swimming underwater, and suddenly, I lose my breath, and I have a heart attack. Obviously, I'm always panicked. I'm scared to death of having another heart attack. You can't forget a ...
by Razoredge
Tue Apr 02, 2019 6:13 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Hanako's Broken Heart Club
Replies: 4852
Views: 356040

Re: Hanako's Broken Heart Club

Well, for me, the previous week wasn't a nice one. For two reasons. I met a girl on the Internet two or three months ago, I think. She means a lot to me, and she's very nice. We're on the same chat server, a forum's chat server. On this server, there's a guy. This guy was, before, a friend of mine. ...
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 20, 2019 5:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Masterplan (Finished)
Replies: 13
Views: 709

Re: The Masterplan (Finished)

That was gold. This stuff about Kenji is pure gold. For me, you had grasped him well. But yeah, an anti-feminist who put secret spy cameras in the "enemy territory" who can't see anything later, it's pure gold.
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 20, 2019 5:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 218962

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190318 Yamaku's Cheshire Cat)

Short but very cute. I really love to read good Hanako and Miki's stuff. Especially when something is about this pairing. One of my instant favorites.
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 20, 2019 5:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1502

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-5 added 03-20-2019

Steel Strings Last night, I slept a few hours longer than I used to. It happens sometimes. Especially if I'm tired. I needed it. I swim longer on Sundays. I learned something interesting. One of my swimming mates warned me about a little tournament. I have a whole month to train myself. In this sch...
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 15, 2019 2:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Razor's One Shots & misc.
Replies: 3
Views: 181

Re: Razor's One Shots & misc.

First at all, thanks for the message. I'm aware this piece has some shortcomings, if it's required, I can rewrite it. In my mind, their relation is based on mutual trust. So, in fact, her mother will tell her everything, but it can take some time. As I say, if it's required, because of the shortcomi...
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 15, 2019 9:16 am
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Nagisa Furukawa
Replies: 3
Views: 215

Re: Nagisa Furukawa

I approve this image, very well done. Simple but cute.
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 15, 2019 9:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-04-14)
Replies: 90
Views: 5287

Re: Yet another one-shot thread

I never gave my feedback to your writings, it's a shame, I know.

But, yeah, I enjoyed every piece you dropped. Especially the last one. It was very well done. It's short but so cute.
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 15, 2019 7:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Razor's One Shots & misc.
Replies: 3
Views: 181

Razor's OS & misc. - Burden

Burden I hate running. Especially when it's raining. But I can't avoid sports lessons. I don't want to be seen as a lazy girl. It's raining a lot today. The rain, on a hot summer day, is a good thing. But, when I run, it's my worst enemy. I never had good stamina, so I never performed well. My teac...
by Razoredge
Fri Mar 15, 2019 6:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Razor's One Shots & misc.
Replies: 3
Views: 181

Razor's One Shots & misc.

Hi everyone. I wanted writing some OS from a very long time. Now, I have the opportunity to do it. In this topic, you'll see some Kaori's OS and other stuff. It will take more time than my fic, because I'm focused on this piece of writing. I can drop a "long" or a short piece, everything is possible...
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 06, 2019 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Updated 4/15/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - No Heart Attack]
Replies: 37
Views: 1241

Re: (WIP - Updated 3/5/2019) Pilgrimage - A Subversion of Fate [Divergent Story - Hisao w/o Heart Attack]

For me, it's really interesting so far. I will keep this story in my "read more" list. I don't see the problem here too. For me, it's a nice content.
by Razoredge
Wed Mar 06, 2019 3:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-7 added 04-21-2019
Replies: 19
Views: 1502

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - I-4 added 02-17-2019

I appreciate your message. The result is a mix between my own writing "skills" and Mirage's correcting, (I really thank him for that) but, thanks for that. I hope the rest of the story will satisfy you.