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by fermatiauda
Mon May 04, 2015 3:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28815

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [05/04/15] Update*

So fucking good, been waiting for this almost two weeks (i think), and wanna know something, it was worth the wait.

Really loving it so far, and i know i'll keep loving it. <3

Wes Anderson got nothing on this. :D
by fermatiauda
Sun May 03, 2015 12:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

Re: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

I think my main problem was just how sudden the mood changed back and forth, I know in your first chapter you want to intrigue the reader , but the characters were doing a good enough job of that themselves. I still hold it’s a massive reaction given the information we’re presented, I think less mi...
by fermatiauda
Sat May 02, 2015 8:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

Re: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

AntonSlavik020 wrote:This isn't bad. The only real comment I have is you could do a better job with time skips, particularly when they went to the cafeteria. Besides that, decent job so far.
Thanks mate, i really appreciate it. :D

BTW i'm loving all the feedback right now, keep it going. <3
by fermatiauda
Sat May 02, 2015 5:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

Re: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

Usually, when someone decrlares from the start that they are going to write a whole route for their first piece of fanfiction ever, I get ready for the worst. In this case I don't think I need to worry too much. :-) Oow, that's such a nice thing to say. <3 Most new authors tend to use too few line ...
by fermatiauda
Sat May 02, 2015 7:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

Re: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

Feurox wrote: Obviously we don't know what's caused that reaction, something so extreme to something so petty, but if it's a quirk of a character, then to me at least, it's intriguing to see why
That's exactly what i thought when i was doing it, that's why i didn't change that part. :)
by fermatiauda
Sat May 02, 2015 7:22 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

Re: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

I’m sorry, daddy, I promised you that I'd never leave work undone. Not while I can complete it. Tears start flowing down my face. This is such an extreme reaction for not finishing newspaper club stuff. If it’s because she’s reminded of her dead(?) father, then show us that, because it feels very m...
by fermatiauda
Sat May 02, 2015 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.
Replies: 11
Views: 2420

"Can you seek the truth?" A Natsume Pseudoroute.

Hi, didn't see you there. This is the first time i write fanfiction, actually is the first time i write something that isn't homework. First i started this as a One-shot, but i realized that i didn't wanted a One-Shot, i wanted the Natsume route that KS lacked, so i made it, or at least i'm trying ...
by fermatiauda
Sun Apr 12, 2015 3:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28815

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/10/15] Update*

Quick question.

Shouldn't Molly be referring to the other girls who she doesn't got any kind of connection by their last names, like Ikezawa instead of Hanako.

Just saying cause i thought i saw it somewhere in chapter 2 and i'm to lazy to quote it. :)
by fermatiauda
Fri Apr 10, 2015 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28815

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/10/15] Update*

Really good, you're getting better at it.

Really liking how you made Molly's personality, fun part, that's exactly how i pictured her.

Keep the good word.
by fermatiauda
Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gravity: A Molly Pseudo- Pseudo Route. Updated as of 11/03/2019
Replies: 113
Views: 28815

Re: Gravity-Molly pseudo route [04/6/15] Update*

It's all fun and games until Suzu is fucking someone other than Hisao.

With that said, i would like to tell you that i'm liking it so far, keep the good work buddy. :D
by fermatiauda
Mon Mar 23, 2015 3:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Emi's Arc/Akiko's Story (Complete)
Replies: 77
Views: 27446

Re: After the Dream—Emi's Arc (Complete; Changes 20150322)

God damnit bryt, you did it again, kudos, cheers, lots of love and keep the good work. :)

Edit: i forgot to say that i loved Emi's ending, so sad but.... I don't know which word to use that can describe it, i think beautiful might be that word, i don't know, lots of mixed feelings.
by fermatiauda
Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20191202 The Pusher)
Replies: 1812
Views: 251803

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Currently Undergoing a Sea Change)

One of the saddest ones after Closure, but still, soo depresing i knew there was something wrong, i knew it couldn't be a happy story with a happy end, but still was pretty good.

I don't think i've cried while reading a fanfiction since Closure. So damn good