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by scratchminus
Thu Feb 21, 2019 12:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 3276

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 3 - Updated 3/11/18)

Author’s Note: Hello again. What a familiar situation we’re in, with me having a chapter completed for months and just never posting it. I know this is a short one, but I have another 2 chapters that are pretty much complete (and much longer), so if all goes well those will be posted soon. Chapter ...
by scratchminus
Fri Feb 08, 2019 5:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)
Replies: 4
Views: 337

Signs (Very Late S9 Submission)

First off, let me apologize to my wonderful secret santa recipient, Brickty , who was extremely nice about the fact that I’m super late on submitting this story. I had an extensive lapse in motivation, and then school started back and I realized I had way less time to work on it. Regardless of all t...
by scratchminus
Thu Mar 22, 2018 2:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 3276

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 3 - Updated 3/11/18)

I meant to reply to all of this like the day after I posted but that didn't happen, lol. There's few enough good Emilogue options. I am so far enjoying this tremendously I'm surprised I didn't leave any comments on this fic earlier but it's really coming along nicely so far. Well-paced, and good dia...
by scratchminus
Sun Mar 11, 2018 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 4 - Updated 2/20/19)
Replies: 18
Views: 3276

Re: Ungraceful Reunion - An Emilogue (Chap 2 - Updated 7/28/17)

Author's Note: This chapter has been completed for quite some time, but I've been editing it for a while. I figured it was time to finally post it since I was basically just avoiding it at that point. Chapter 3 - Exertion My fingers drum absentmindedly against the cool plastic of my water bottle, c...
by scratchminus
Thu Feb 22, 2018 8:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219009

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180218 'Schwäche' by WetCrate)

I think I'm going to keep my thoughts as concise as I can on this one. (Edit from future scratchminus: I failed to keep it concise lol) I'll start by saying that writing a story about Emi creates an immediate bias for me (not a negative one, mind you), so my instinct is almost always to go into it w...
by scratchminus
Fri Feb 16, 2018 4:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scratch's Scratchings (A One-Shot Thread; 2-15-18)
Replies: 5
Views: 872

Re: Scratch's Scratchings (A One-Shot Thread; 2-15-18)

Well, that was... cute. At first I thought the idea of waiting ten years with the proposal was a bit strange, but if it makes sense with any of the girls, it would be Emi. A proposal in public is probably VERY unlikely- in Japan in general and for Hisao specifically. Yeah, I was thinking about that...
by scratchminus
Fri Feb 16, 2018 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Scratch's Scratchings (A One-Shot Thread; 2-15-18)
Replies: 5
Views: 872

Scratch's Scratchings (A One-Shot Thread; 2-15-18)

Forgive the garbo formatting for now, I'll make it look better later...maybe. In an attempt to hone my craft and finally start writing about some of the KS girls aside from Emi, I've decided to start writing one-shots! (One shots? Oneshots. Who knows.) It's unfortunate that the first of these stori...
by scratchminus
Tue Feb 13, 2018 8:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20190401 Silence Falls)
Replies: 1758
Views: 219009

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20180211 'Eat My Shorts' by NekoDude)

I don't really know what to say about this that someone hasn't already said. The story is written decently, and there's nothing grammar wise or whatnot that particularly bothers me. But overall it just doesn't feel like anything of substance takes place. On top of that, I don't really know if I like...
by scratchminus
Mon Jan 01, 2018 2:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Two Turtledoves (Lilly x Hisao S8 oneshot)
Replies: 9
Views: 1520

Re: Two Turtledoves (Lilly x Hisao S8 oneshot)

I love this story! This had the perfect amount of cuteness and feeling that I'd expect an encounter like that to actually have. The characters, especially Lilly, felt spot on. I also really liked the inclusion of Takumi, he worked perfectly as a contrasting personality to the rest of them. Overall g...
by scratchminus
Sun Dec 31, 2017 8:00 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission
Replies: 7
Views: 958

Re: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission

I think the "wavering bonds" part is nicely done - why should that have to be a sad story? I don't really consider Hisao and Miki "unusually paired", though, but I'm not complaining :-) Thanks, I appreciate it Mirage! And yeah, I wasn't quite sure how close to "unusually paired" the two of them wer...
by scratchminus
Sun Dec 31, 2017 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Our Holiday Vacation — A Shizune One-shot & 8S Submission
Replies: 8
Views: 1018

Re: Our Holiday Vacation — 8S Submission

Even though I'm not the biggest fan of Shizune, I really enjoyed this story. I think the characterization was spot on, I laughed at all the right times, and the ending was super adorable.

Overall, nice work Zere. :wink:
by scratchminus
Sat Dec 30, 2017 4:35 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dark Winter Sky (S8)
Replies: 7
Views: 1230

Re: Dark Winter Sky (S8)

I love it, I love it, I love it. I literally can't think of a single thing I disliked. The characterizations were on point, the story itself was extremely sweet and enjoyable to read, and I even found myself laughing and smiling like an idiot throughout it. And it doesn't hurt that it's about my fav...
by scratchminus
Fri Dec 29, 2017 11:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission
Replies: 7
Views: 958

Re: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission

Lovely. Miki and domestic bliss are always enjoyable when mixed. :) Thanks, I appreciate it! I absolutely loved reading this. It was everything I wanted out of a Christmas story: comfy and enjoyable, without being over-the-top (though I suppose that's subjective). Your characters were great, you se...
by scratchminus
Fri Dec 29, 2017 1:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Fresh Snow - S8 Submission
Replies: 7
Views: 958

Fresh Snow - S8 Submission

Prompt: Depict and embody the wavering bonds of friendship of any two unusually paired characters across the holiday season. Victim: Zerebos I'll make my author's note short. I may have played it a bit safe with this story in terms of the chosen characters and the ending, but I think it still came ...
by scratchminus
Tue Aug 08, 2017 4:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories
Replies: 14
Views: 1913

Re: Hisao's Daily Life as a Teacher and other short stories

I've been wanting to give my advice/insight on this for a bit, but I wasn't quite sure what to say that wasn't already being said by others. I could talk about specific elements of the story and why they don't make sense, but since Oddball, Mirage, and Stiles already did that I'm gonna try to approa...