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by Gamma
Sat Jul 11, 2015 12:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 69050

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 4-5a up 20150705)

Well... As the updates grew later and later I'd wondered how'd Kenji was going to take the event that managed to influence all of the characters in the wide universe you've established. I'm not too surprised at that particular turn of events. I wonder how long Hisao's death is going to weigh on Kenj...
by Gamma
Thu Feb 12, 2015 12:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 81036

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (15—'Takoyaki') (20150211)

Please tell me the most recent one-shot is considered cannon in the After the Dream-verse. Please say it is so. Because if it is cannon, I think that was the shortest amount of time elapsed from Yamaku to a "happy ending" you've ever done. That was an incredibly sweet and enjoyable one-shot that had...
by Gamma
Sat Feb 07, 2015 3:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 109
Views: 39014

Re: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/Testament (Complete 20150207

Hmmm... Lilly's final testament fills out an unusual role in the After the Dream-verse. It's pretty much as if Lilly got another arc, though with this one's narration being inflected with her older and "wiser" voice. As with all of the stories in this well expanded universe the writing was top notch...
by Gamma
Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:03 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#61—'Paralysis')
Replies: 283
Views: 81036

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (13—'72 Hours'/Saki) (20150124)

Okay, I've only gotten around to reading the most recent one shot, 72 hours. I'll get around to my thoughts of the other two... eventually. So this is absolutely brilliant. Coming in with no prior information about the fan fiction was a good idea. Having to uncover what in the bloody hell was actual...
by Gamma
Sun Dec 28, 2014 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 69050

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 3 Complete 20141226)

The best part about being offline for extended periods is the eventual catching up of everything that was on-going before I left. As always I enjoyed these last two chapters. A couple of things that peaked my interest and enjoyment: “Kenji, you sound like someone from a manga.” “I do?” It takes me a...
by Gamma
Fri Dec 12, 2014 4:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295868

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.54 posted 11/

In other news, I remember mentioning before that I felt like my patience for Hanako as a character hit its breaking point in this chapter, and I still feel that way. Hmmm... Now that's interesting. Especially as your feelings conflict so heavily with the feelings I had on reading about Hanako's mos...
by Gamma
Fri Dec 05, 2014 9:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 69050

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 3-4b up 20141201)

After a thoroughly exhausting six day trip, I was presently surprised to find not one, but two new chapters in the Sakura saga. These two chapters were just so good in so many ways. Firstly, I was so happy to see Kenji's relationship with Yuuko grow in strength. The family dynamic between the two of...
by Gamma
Tue Nov 25, 2014 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 69050

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 3-3c up 20141125)

I've made it clear how much I'm in love with this Kenji route. I just want to reiterate how fantastic his journey's been. Man, this chapter just felt so, so good. Every word had my undivided attention. The line about Kenji's game being self improvement made me grin a lot. I don't think there could h...
by Gamma
Tue Nov 25, 2014 5:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1549
Views: 295868

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Ch.54 posted 11/

Your Hanako continues to make me squeal in delight inside. Like seriously, her character development over this long journey has been absolutely fantastic. And as brythain pointed out, your presentation of her has only become more nuanced as time's gone on. It's been awesome. It was nice to have the ...
by Gamma
Thu Nov 20, 2014 11:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Book 6 complete 20190527)
Replies: 183
Views: 69050

Re: Sakura—The Kenji Saga (Part 3-3b up 20141117)

I can see why Kenji retrospectively calls these five years his 'quiet years'. Kenji is incredibly serious about reforming in more ways than one. I wonder if he's ever going to get to the point where he can just sit back and feel satisfied with who he is. Considering the guilt he carries around, some...
by Gamma
Tue Nov 18, 2014 1:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Updated 20190704)
Replies: 106
Views: 41612

Re: After the Dream—Rika/Mutou/Akira (Complete; upd 20140824

And... Now I'm completely caught up with everything in the After the Dream universe. Damn. I really like being able to consume good fiction. As soon as I find something that's awesome I have to put everything else I'm doing down and experience as much of that world as possible. Only problem about fa...
by Gamma
Sun Nov 16, 2014 2:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (Rika update 20190704)
Replies: 155
Views: 78299

Re: After the Dream—Main Index (Hisao: Spectrum, up 20141111

As a newcomer to using forums my attempts at communicating my thoughts may be a little... rough. I just wanted to say that I think this fanfic is absolutely fantastic. I've read a few Katawa Shoujo fan fictions before and I've been fortunate enough that the ones I've read have all been great in thei...