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by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Oct 07, 2015 11:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Monsters Like Us (KS x Monsters) Ch. 4: Shadows
Replies: 44
Views: 9384

Re: Monsters Like Us (KS x MonMusu)

Alpacalypse wrote: My one possible problem is that it looks just a little like your mc is going to come down with a severe case of VN protagonistitis.
I'm no doctor, but that sounds fatal.
by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Oct 07, 2015 11:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 859
Views: 185996

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}

I've read a chapter, and this seems really interesting thus far. I've noticed that some aspects of your writing are kind of similar to mine, namely, the type of humor.
by Mohn_Jadden
Wed Oct 07, 2015 11:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Swampie's Stories : Writings of a mad-man 3
Replies: 179
Views: 32611

Re: Swampie's Stories: Mirror Shots : 1 : 8/10/15

Hey, this stuff is pretty good. Great work!

Though it's so weird to see Miki actually excelling at school. (Then again, that studying relationship is around the same, iirc, since Suzu sleeps through alot of her classes, she ends up missing a bunch.)
by Mohn_Jadden
Tue Oct 06, 2015 11:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

Gah, hate the SKULLS Unit! Total bullshit and a pain in the assto deal with! :evil: Sorry, got me on a MGSV rant. :oops: Don't do the extreme version of the one @ the airport. Did it like 35 times before I managed to do it. Anyway, I'm currently shaping up the new part. Looks like Hiko will be seen...
by Mohn_Jadden
Mon Oct 05, 2015 9:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

Change of plan, instead of the next part being the final one, we're going to have another Aoi-centric chapter. With guest appearances from Shizune, Misha, and The 'SKULLS' Parasite Unit.

Sorry! We just want to make sure that Part 2 is sufficiently fleshed out before moving onto Part 3.
by Mohn_Jadden
Mon Oct 05, 2015 8:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

That line about the ps2 really cracked me up. 8) I'd be a bit worried if Hisao dropped in for a visit at 5am though. Darn, I could've sworn I changed that to 'PM'. In any case, the generation of the game-system is yet to be determined. It's her father's actually, a character that I hope to incorpor...
by Mohn_Jadden
Mon Oct 05, 2015 7:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

Seems interesting. And since I text by dragging my finger across the screen, proper punctuation comes with it. I guess they're using flip phones, though I suppose if this takes place in, what, 07? That makes sense. 07? Could've sworn it was in 06. I dunno. In any case, the dates aren't really all t...
by Mohn_Jadden
Mon Oct 05, 2015 6:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

Image

Toying around with an idea. Might make an appearance in the story.
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Oct 04, 2015 4:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

I'm a little late on this one, but still. I make a noise somewhere between a muffled cry and a choked sob as I realize that the sandwich she gave me was made from the elder god’s ambrosia. It feels like absolute flavor heaven in my mouth, every different taste and hint going perfectly with one anot...
by Mohn_Jadden
Sun Oct 04, 2015 2:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

FelOnyx wrote:OH YEAH! IT'S BACK, BABY!

You guys are awesome, keep it up!
It's only been... 10 months? :P

Anyway, thanks for the support! Really helps motivate us to keep this going.
by Mohn_Jadden
Sat Oct 03, 2015 2:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

I've gone way, way too far with this, haven't I? Sorry. :oops: Nah fam, it's cool. I believe she did wear the swagger vest when Keiko, Hisao, and her went to the Shanghai before, when Aoi finished it off by talking about stars and stuff. I'm more proud of the aviators though. Basically it's the sce...
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2

Bradycardia wrote:I quit.
No. Not until they do the horizontal snuggles.
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Oct 02, 2015 2:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 12/

Alright, I've reached Brady, Part 7 should be made official by the end of today.

Thank you all again for expressing your interest and support!
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Oct 02, 2015 7:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 12/

@Alpacalypse: Thanks for pointing that out! Corrected (I think...?)

@Mirage: Overall, yeah, we do have quite a bit planned out, but I'm still making ideas to fit in between those plans.
by Mohn_Jadden
Fri Oct 02, 2015 12:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 31006

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 12/

I apologize, the ending to this one was a bit rushed, since if I didn't do it now, I'd most likely never get it done. I owe you guys at least an explanation of our situation. Brady is in college now and lives somewhere where the internet isn't as easy as where he lived before, and I'm a senior, taki...