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by HazelKim
Tue May 05, 2015 8:49 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Random KS Discussion
Replies: 3060
Views: 250133

Re: Random KS Discussion

Oh boy, a new VN? What's it about? How do you make one of those anyway? Congrats on the big 365 man.
by HazelKim
Thu Jan 01, 2015 1:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Happy New Year!
Replies: 21
Views: 3940

Re: Happy New Year!

Aww, happy new year. Everyone make some good new year promises/resolutions.
by HazelKim
Thu Dec 25, 2014 6:03 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Merry Christmas
Replies: 18
Views: 3680

Re: Merry Christmas

Coffee I love you. Merry Christmas KS forums. Thank you based Suriko.
by HazelKim
Thu Nov 13, 2014 12:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16334

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Five Up]

Good chapter, Shadow of the Truth coming on near the end for me made it doubly dramatic. I'm less informed on disabilities, so I'm not sure what it could be. One thing to note, it could have done with some more proofreading, as there were some small errors in there. But they weren't so much that the...
by HazelKim
Tue Nov 11, 2014 12:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 33299

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 14 up!

I guess. I think I'm just too caught up in the story, I don't want to guess where it's heading. I'm worried where it's heading because I want this story to end well. I guess bias is involved and I'm a bit of a dunce sometimes. I dunno, I can't defend myself solidly, the only rhing I picked up on was...
by HazelKim
Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 33299

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 14 up!

Tealeaf! She punched Akihiro! Also the extended family is so bitchy! Nice chapter, on form. My worries for the future is that this feels like the climax/ending to a fic, what with the whole ball. These have been some big scenes which have left me wondering where will you go after this? Maybe that's ...
by HazelKim
Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16334

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Four Up]

To add my compliments to the bundle, this has rapidly been turning into a very sweet story so I feel like I gotta say something. Mina is great, her characterisation is spot on. The repetition of her blushing being as red as her scarf is very nice. And sweet. Sweet is really the word to sum this up. ...
by HazelKim
Sun Oct 19, 2014 8:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning the blues. Act 3: Scene 2 revives from the grave
Replies: 162
Views: 33299

Re: Learning the blues. Act 2 Scene 12 up!

Oh Tealeaf you dog ;) As per your suggestion I made an account so I shall basically say what I have already told you. Every chapter is a delight to read and the errors are practically non-existant now. In this chapter I liked the first image you showed us of Ayane's mother, truly impressive and inti...