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by bubeez
Sat Mar 30, 2019 4:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)
Replies: 5
Views: 706

Re: Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)

I didn't continue my old story for two reasons. The plot was not planned out very well. I remember stalling at the last chapter because I didn't know where I was going anymore, I was constantly changing the ending between chapters, and other panic signs that the planing was poor. I've studied more s...
by bubeez
Thu Mar 28, 2019 5:09 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)
Replies: 5
Views: 706

Remember Me (An Amnesia Story)

Hi, i'm starting a new version of my defunct fanfiction which starred my OC character, Seiki. You can find it on my profile, but I won't be continuing that particular storyline. I've cut some characters out (Suzu) and it's not going down the same plotline. Remember Me What do you see when you look u...
by bubeez
Wed Oct 28, 2015 8:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15

Added a little more to the end of the last chapter; I like the new ending more than the previous cliffhanger I had. Sets up the atmosphere I really wanted for these upcoming chapters, too.
by bubeez
Mon Oct 26, 2015 9:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 8/17/15]

Can You Remember Me? Chapter 15 The week rolls by quickly, a slew of problems and hopes speeding up time itself; I get the feeling of being swept away with the flow of time. Yamaku has seemingly changed around me. Buildings seem brighter, the bricks themselves giving off a sense of belonging. I hav...
by bubeez
Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 6/21/15]

Can You Remember Me? Chapter 14 Part 2 ….. Shizune finishes writing, her description of that day put so vividly into words. “See? I gave it my best shot.” She shrugs, resting her hand on the desk in front of us. That was quite a few pages. I stretch my neck, peering out of the Student Council windo...
by bubeez
Mon Aug 17, 2015 10:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 6/21/15]

Can You Remember Me? Chapter 14 Part 1 Note: Part 1 is in Shizune's perspective. Today is going exceptionally well, despite Misha looking completely worn out. She’ll probably fall asleep before we make it to the end of the day. Even though we’ve done it a million times, she never seems to acclimate...
by bubeez
Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 07/24/15)
Replies: 47
Views: 9359

Re: KS Writing Club: Cherry Blossoms (Updated 06/23/15)

Hope you all enjoy Part 4! -bubeez [Daylight](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zzCJASxRdTQ) The festival is in full swing by the time I leave the dormitory; the sun is shining through the numerous clouds in the sky, as well as my partly-cloudy mood. It would probably be best to head back inside and g...
by bubeez
Sun Jun 21, 2015 1:10 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 6/21/15]

Cleaned up the errors a bit, thanks for pointing them out. Anyway, i'm assuming library fees makes sense given that Yamaku is supposed to emulate a normal school. I'm sure they're easily excused or forgiven. Thoughts on that? Also, NOT the toothache page! Haha. Thanks for reading, everyone! (Oh, and...
by bubeez
Sun Jun 21, 2015 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 10/26/15]
Replies: 157
Views: 33939

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story [Updated 5/20/15]

Can You Remember Me? Chapter 13 “Whaaat time is iiit….” I speak lazily, flailing my limbs about in a morning stretch. Right leg, left leg, left arm, right ar- I feel a slight resistance to my right arm, but I really don’t have the energy to check. I relax all of my limbs again, closing my eyes for ...
by bubeez
Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Diary of a Flower"--
Replies: 0
Views: 2157

"Diary of a Flower"--

Entry 1 Today I- I went to class- My book was overdue and- I don’t really know how to go about this. The Nurse told me I should keep a diary or a journal. He gave me a whole, slightly endearing speech about how it builds communication skills. He even recommended a sort of pen pal system… I don’t th...
by bubeez
Fri Jun 05, 2015 4:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Mask Off: A Molly Route (Update 3/8)
Replies: 72
Views: 20377

Re: "Can you open your mind?" A Molly Pseudo-Route (Update 6

Wonderful! Keep writing, please. First, praises. I like the characterization of 'sleep,' I think it was very creative and the way it was written was alluring and eye-capturing. The details you use to describe Molly were admirable. I especially liked "Her face shows reminiscence of nostalgia with a h...
by bubeez
Sun May 24, 2015 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End
Replies: 6
Views: 1656

Re: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End

(It's odd that the Lilly Bad End seems to have become to jumping-off point for, like, a million fics. A shame, I much prefer Hanako's bad end, because the emotional backlash of knowing 'you fucked up' will probably haunt Hisao for years.) It's because Lilly's Bad End is a permanent enough ending th...
by bubeez
Sun May 24, 2015 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End
Replies: 6
Views: 1656

Re: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End

A little tidbit I added in. … I listen to the quiet hum of the plane, un-eased by the less-than-gentle rocking of the cabin. I hate planes. Sterile air. The seats and cabin feel so uniformly similar. Akira has already bought herself quite a few drinks. I sip at the one she had bought for me earlier;...
by bubeez
Sat May 23, 2015 10:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End
Replies: 6
Views: 1656

Re: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End

Thank you! I love your coffee analogy; nothing says it better than that. I'm glad you enjoyed!
by bubeez
Fri May 22, 2015 1:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End
Replies: 6
Views: 1656

"She's in Scotland"-- Lilly Post-Neutral End

I don't know if I'll continue this, just wanted to post. I know it's a little short :P She's In Scotland She’s in Scotland. ... This is okay. She’s in Scotland. ... I help Rin unbutton her shirt, as I’ve done countless times. She usually stays quiet when we get to this point in the night. Tonight is...