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by HITK220
Fri Jul 20, 2018 2:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

Re: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1.1

It's taken me the better part of 4 hours, but I think I have the grammar mostly sorted out. Now to go through and fix some of the things Mirage pointed out.
Thanks for being patient with me while I relearn basic English grammar Lol. ^-^ Cheers!
by HITK220
Thu Jul 19, 2018 4:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

Re: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1.1

You have quite a lot of grammar errors Yeah it's been about 3 years or more since I've had to do any kind of writing, luckily that just leaves plenty of room for improvement. Thank you for your praise hopefully with some help I can have it be a lot more coherent in the near future. ^-^ Cheers friend
by HITK220
Thu Jul 19, 2018 4:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

Re: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1.1

I'll be posting the second half of part one tomorrow as I can feel my body betraying me in my time of need, daring to demand sleep. Hope you're all enjoying it so far! ^-^
by HITK220
Thu Jul 19, 2018 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit
Replies: 6
Views: 1363

From Humble Beginnings (Hanako good end) Part:1 (Post Mirage Edit

Part one: Bliss I never thought things would turn out this way for me. Coming to Yamaku seemed like giving up on who I once was, and yet here I stand feeling more alive than I did before I almost died. The warmth of the sun on my back and the lingering taste of cherries on my lips, together Hanako a...
by HITK220
Mon Jan 05, 2015 2:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Katawa shoujo Generations (5)

Thanks for stopping by for the newest update thanks to the helping hand I have got from Mirage_GSM there should be fewer errors and hopefully its more enjoyable to read. on a side note, I am really happy with the number of views this has got, and I hope everyone is enjoying it. Nightmares and dreams...
by HITK220
Fri Jan 02, 2015 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 70367

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 11/24)

at least according to what I understood from Scissorlips' route. Ahh ok now I remember. It would only make sense to follow up on how the characters act if you are basing yours loosely off Scissorlips suzu route. I forgot it was his route I read that had Lezard in it. Anyways looking forward to seei...
by HITK220
Mon Dec 29, 2014 11:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Re: Katawa shoujo Generations

Thank you for the offer to proofread i'll definitely take you up on that haha, Ill be fixing the little errors shortly after posting this.
by HITK220
Sun Dec 28, 2014 10:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Katawa shoujo Generations (4)

Pre-Festival set up The week passes in a blur of school, Food, and sleep. I can feel the school routine slowly setting in. Fortunately this routine is broken when Friday rolls around and its time for me to fulfill my promise of setting up the festival with Kari and Natsume. We go through our morning...
by HITK220
Sun Dec 28, 2014 9:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Re: Katawa shoujo Generations

It's unlikely there's more than one I was thinking about Tantaban (I probably butchered the spelling sorry) and for some reason I thought there was something to do with a winter festival (Maybe i'm just losing my mind.) *Fixed* His name is Mr. Nakai Yeahhhh no excuses on that one, I kinda just butc...
by HITK220
Sun Dec 28, 2014 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Katawa shoujo Generations (3)

* A festive week * I awake to the lovely sound of my alarm blaring in my ear. I jump to my feet to turn the damned thing off. Damn its too early, why did I set it so early? After getting up I remember, I never got a shower since I got here. I get up and grab my change of clothes heading to the showe...
by HITK220
Sun Dec 28, 2014 4:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 70367

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 11/24)

Wow this is great, I love how this ties in with the pseudo suzu route. Although the part in the diner had me rooting for Suzu haha. Looking forward to more from you keep up the good work my friend,


just a quick thought, why is Lezard always seen as such a bad guy?
by HITK220
Tue Dec 23, 2014 3:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Re: Katawa shoujo Generations

thank you for pointing all that out I have the problem fixed but unfortunately my internet isn't being kind so it will be awhile before I can post the fixed version but please hang in there its on the way.
by HITK220
Mon Dec 22, 2014 9:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Re: Katawa shoujo Generations

Gah! Was going so well until WallOfText.
:c Yeahhh sorry its all better now (I hope). Thanks for saying something that was pretty bad haha.
by HITK220
Mon Dec 22, 2014 9:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Katawa shoujo Generations (2)

Welcome back readers to the next installment of Katawa Shoujo Generations One of the things you will notice is there are several choices in this part and the next, this is because at some point once I have finished this first rout I plan on adding on and making more. 1 route I definitely want to cre...
by HITK220
Sat Dec 20, 2014 10:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa shoujo Generations
Replies: 33
Views: 4196

Re: Katawa shoujo Generations

If you looked through the links I posted you'll find that lot's of Japanese names end in "yama" (mountain), "kawa/gawa" (river), da (field) or shima (island), so if youwant to change it anyway but like to keep the "kaze" part, you might want to use a combination with one of those. Ok thank you for ...