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by CloudGrain
Wed Dec 24, 2014 5:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)
Replies: 102
Views: 149683

Re: Summer's Clover (Miki Path)

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by CloudGrain
Sun Nov 30, 2014 11:33 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229300

Re: Recommend a VN

Something which might or might not affect your judgment: the four heroines featured in the promo video are patterned after Russian imageboard mascots (and the fifth is a Miku clone, but I figure you noticed THAT). Further investigation and decisions left as an exercise to the reader. I did come to ...
by CloudGrain
Sat Nov 29, 2014 11:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]

Loved it. The talk between Mina and Hisao was well done. Glad to see her finally realize what Hisao was really trying to do and why he was angry with her. Also, loved everything about the last paragraph. That was hilarious. Nice bit of levity after the heavy topic of the previous conversation. Also...
by CloudGrain
Fri Nov 28, 2014 12:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Act Two, Scene Eight*;

Act Two, Scene Eight But for every truth perceived "Get out, Nakai." Not pleasant first words, and coldly spoken... but they felt appropriate. Despite the turmoil of emotions brewing inside me as I turn away from the figure in the doorway, my voice is almost perfectly toneless as I stare up at the ...
by CloudGrain
Sat Nov 22, 2014 1:21 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Recommend a VN
Replies: 1746
Views: 229300

Re: Recommend a VN

Just played through my second ever VN, Everlasting Summer , which is actually out free via Steam. It's good. A bit short in most aspects, (each 'route' took me around 2-3 hours), somewhat convoluted in places, and somewhat amusingly bad 'Runglish' for the Russian to English translation at many point...
by CloudGrain
Thu Nov 20, 2014 9:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Seven Up]

It looks like her sisters may be just who she needed to talk to to realize how much if an idiot shes been. I don't expect it to be instant, of course, but she seems to be on the right path. Indeed, sometimes it takes getting told the same thing over and over, but especially from a perspective someo...
by CloudGrain
Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:23 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Fanfic inspirations.
Replies: 9
Views: 2838

Re: Fanfic inspirations.

Having far too much time on my hands, so just random thoughts which occur when I'm doing nothing terribly important. Randomly thinking out scenes multiple times in order to better examine things from a few different frames of mind.
by CloudGrain
Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Act Two, Scene Seven*;

Act Two, Scene Seven*; When first we practice to deceive Yesterday had proven to be somewhat exhausting after getting the phone call from my mom. Up until that point, I'd been able to occupy all the time of my day with alternating merely between hating everything and being bored. In a hospital that...
by CloudGrain
Sat Nov 15, 2014 10:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Six Up]

Is it weird that I enjoyed this chapter? Maybe not so much the seething bitterness but more the fact that we finally got a look into Mina's inner workings and found out that things aren't as fluffy and cute as they are on the outside. The fact that we now have a sense of her struggles and her inter...
by CloudGrain
Fri Nov 14, 2014 8:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Six Up]

-whistles- Daymn Cloud. The bitterness from Mina is practically oozing from the screen as I read, even though she really has only herself to blame.. It's beautiful in it's own twisted way. I hate the fact that he'd cared enough to try and find out what was wrong with me. Ohhh mina, mina, mina you'v...
by CloudGrain
Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Six Up]

I hate Hisao Nakai; the one person to treat me like any other person in the world. The one person who'd been my friend for more than a few days before somehow finding out about my condition and feeling the need to treat me like some sort of fragile, broken person. The irony here is that if she were...
by CloudGrain
Fri Nov 14, 2014 4:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: Act Two, Scene Six*;

Act Two, Scene Six*; Oh what tangled webs we weave; There are plenty of times where you can sit back and hate almost everything and everybody in the world. For most people, it's when they don't get their way on something that they think is important. When they don't get something that they want, do...
by CloudGrain
Thu Nov 13, 2014 6:05 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Five Up]

Well, you definitely cranked up the drama to eleven for this chapter. I think you overdid it a little though - having a potentially life-threatening accident directly after a fight is a bit very cliché... Can't deny either of those bits, I suppose that it is certainly quite cliché... although I fou...
by CloudGrain
Thu Nov 13, 2014 10:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Five Up]

Maybe Minako had a brain fart cerebral haemorrhage. :( But whatever it is, it would be black comedy indeed if Hisao bolted down the stairs, tripped, and wound up in a wheelchair himself. Or a morgue. Bah, I don't think that I'm that cruel! -briefly does another scan of the chapter, feeling the same...
by CloudGrain
Wed Nov 12, 2014 10:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Eight Up]
Replies: 70
Views: 16308

Re: A Crimson Route [Act Two, Scene Five Up]

MASTER OF FUCKING ROMANCE, LADIES AND GENTLEMEN! Good chapter. Just realized what it was halfway through. When Akio mentioned how bad of a mes it'd be if the Minakio fusion tripped. Still, must be majorly bad if the whole school is as worried about her situation as they seem. Thanks kindly for the ...