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Part 3 of 'Through the fire and flames' The evening air is brisk but nice on the skin as we leave my brothers restaurant. The sun is beginning to slowly sink on the horizon but there is still daylight left. “So then Mr. Nakai” I tease, “What are your nefarious plans for me?” Hisao simply gives me a...

Part 2 of 'Through the fire and flames' Akiho is waiting for us at the bus stop. I wasn’t expecting that. She’s in what I dub her ‘bike gear’. Black jeans, black button shirt, leather gloves and her frameless glasses. All she’s missing is the tie and suit jacket and she will look like Saber. She sp...

Ok. Big update. Nearly 8k words. I think I've got everything but there may be typos. Scene 6 will be delivered tomorrow night and scene 7 on Sunday night. I hope you enjoy! ---------------------------- Act 2 Scene 5 Through the fire and the flames… (At least for Hisao) Friday was a hectic day. The d...

Another great chapter. Kinda cheesy at points, but still good. Really looking forward to Hisao meeting her older brother. I know I said I don't like him, but in this case it should be fun. Also, I think "I suddenly feel as though a squadron of butterflies have dive-bombed my stomach." was...

I just sat back and 'dawwwwwwwed' at this. Very cute, very sweet and true to the characters! Really liked it. Good job Cloud!

Early, ahead of schedule... enjoy! ------------------------- Act 2 Scene 4 Lean on me (When you’re not strong) I feel very warm. Comfortable and snuggly so wherever I am, it feels good. Feels safe like I’m at home. I snuggle deeper into my pillow and let out a sigh of contentment. My alarm hasn’t go...

Loved it, especially the scene at the end. It changed it from a good chapter to a great one. Also, I keep getting confused whenever you say "canteen". I thought at first that Fuji was storing food in her drink container at first, and wasn't entirely sure why Ayane was handing her money. Y...

Part 2 of Scene 3 'My little phantom' I laugh, pass Fujiko some yen notes and then hurry out of the classroom and up to the library. I like the library, it has the musty old parchment smell about it and the ambience of the place just sits right with me. Yuuko is nowhere to be seen at the moment, so...

This is a big one so I've chopped it into two chunks! No more updates until thursday earliest I'm afraid, but that said... enjoy! -------------------------------- Act 2 Scene 3 My little phantom. It was another night of broken sleep. This is getting to be a bit like a broken record now. Not a nightm...

I think Mirage is referring to the life guard that appears in Helbereths story "Tomorrows Doom"

I have to say, Akihiro is not a person I would get along with in real life. I'm not big on constant swearing and i HATE smoking. Also, I don't really blame Ayane for not apologizing. In her place, I think I would have fired back too. He was being an asshole. Akihiro is based off me about oooo 6 yea...

I feel as if I've been a bit harsh to some of my characters here but this was how the conversation played out. I did research about haemophilia so I hope that my portrayal at the end of the chapter is accurate. I get the feeling it's not. Also first introduction of Akihiro! Enjoy! ------------------...

Nope I wondered if the scenes were moving along too fast and your feedback about the kiss did prompt me to go back and rejigger the scene. Ok, I can breath a sigh of relief. The tutor session is... No kinky times no, but whatever you may have in mind, I shall leave it as we begin to learn more about...

I'm calling it right now, Ayane's new English teacher will be Akiho! Another great chapter Tea, I really liked the cinematic you came up with as well. Keep up the great work! :D Goddamit frosty! I admit nothing! NOTHING! :lol: Thanks, the cinematic literally just popped up in my head so I figured, ...

Well after open evening, talk like a pirate day and marking 60 exams I still manage to churn out a 3.6k chapter. I've read over it 3 times but there may still be mistakes. Enjoy! --------------- As act 1 ends the cinematic begins. The screen fades out to black, then pulls out into an old ‘movie scre...