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by AceLions
Tue Dec 16, 2014 8:01 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC
Replies: 5
Views: 3093

Re: Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC

cool I made her on Rinmaru Games then added her wrinkles on Windows paint
by AceLions
Tue Nov 25, 2014 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC
Replies: 5
Views: 3093

Re: Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC

Thank you
by AceLions
Sat Nov 22, 2014 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 298837

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

All the research you put in to show off true cultural differences between Japan & Western areas is cool. It make me decide to do some to make sure I get some things right. Started watching Japanology on Youtube to learn some things the Cast will deal with.
by AceLions
Thu Nov 20, 2014 1:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)
Replies: 317
Views: 298837

Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

It’s been a while since I first read the first part so I decided to start over when I reread the whole thing. It is a very good story. Miss Yumi & Jun are great characters. You really show off Miss Yumi’s caring & why she is so good for Hanako making her click with everyone even me. I think Jun woul...
by AceLions
Sun Nov 09, 2014 9:04 pm
Forum: Fan Art
Topic: Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC
Replies: 5
Views: 3093

Miss Yumi Guest Poster's OC

I'm a Fan of Guest Poster's OC Miss Yumi She has a great personality & a good heart. Like many of people I was drawn to her. The first place i seen her was Truvin's story "Hanako's Story" then later was able to read "Sisterhood"
by AceLions
Tue Sep 09, 2014 5:41 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Beta Reader Needed
Replies: 2
Views: 1548

Re: Beta Reader Needed

No worries on that I just hope to find a beta reader soon to avoid the thing that went on on my story post when i post more Chapters
by AceLions
Tue Sep 09, 2014 3:53 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Beta Reader Needed
Replies: 2
Views: 1548

Beta Reader Needed

Hello everyone. I’m looking for a Beta reader for my stories. I had a couple in the past who were my friends but they have been busy & unable to do it for me. All I need is someone who can help fix what spell check can’t. Like Punctuation, & I think the words Spell check got wrong. I’m Leary posting...
by AceLions
Sat Sep 06, 2014 4:17 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

Yeah I'm looking for a Beta reader right now. Someone who will only fix the stuff spell check didn't catch without trying to change my story.
by AceLions
Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

Ok I hope the edits I was able to do made some kind of impact. I even changed the title to one I thought better. Please let me know what you like it makes doing the things that need changeing worth doing.
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

No I took into account what people said but after the first few post it turned into nothing but. "This sucks it really sucks there is not one good thing about it" I even said if I can find a friend who is a KS fan to beta read it i would have them do it & edit it the fixed way. but since there is no...
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

When it comes to learning anything to do with book smarts it has to do with memory I can read an english text book all day everyday doesn't mean I'll be able to remember anymore than I do now.
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 8:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

I looked through the post about people starting out writeing fanfics. Its not going to help anything. & as I said I jsut saying what I saw people post on here. & not calling people liars you all dont have to be so dead set about how you didn't see them. Everyone hates everything to do with my story ...
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

Wasn't for me. People do say it is easyer but for me it was harder to judge how long the chapter was. but like I said I have seen people say that stories should be script format. I'm not calling anyone a liar just saying what I seen from replys.
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 6:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

English is my only Language I'm just not very good at spelling, grammar, & punctuation. I do use spell check when I write though. I have seen people complain about stories not being in Script some here & some on Fanfiction.net
by AceLions
Fri Sep 05, 2014 5:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A new Life (Follows Hanako's Good ending)
Replies: 27
Views: 4038

Re: After High School (Follows Hanako's Good ending)

Did anyone like anything about it? From what I seen in the VN/Game Hanako's Style of talking changes from time to time. Sometimes she stammers a lot sometimes a few words sometimes not at all. I might leave it in script format because I will just get the same complaints from people that think all Ka...