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Apologies for taking forever to update. I've been dealing with some pretty heavy stuff recently, including suicidal depression. I'm getting better though.

I can't guarantee any updates soon, but I'm not letting go of this project either, so hopefully I'll do something soon. Maybe.

If it's supposed to be a timeskip it should be set apart from the rest of the story (not only at the beginning but also at the end of the time skip). You certainly cannot skip back to present tense within the same paragraph like you did. In this case it's not really necessary to make it a time skip...

The station wasn’t even surrounded by four solid walls, only railings and columns. Climbing out of the driver’s seat was the shortest, burliest man I’ve ever seen. Although the first two were honest mistakes, the last one was deliberately put into past tense because Hisao's recalling what happened ...

Woohoo! A new chapter! ( And this story isn't dead! ) As much as I'd like to give you some useful comments/feedback, I'm horrible at that kind of stuff and I'll leave it to people who will actually know what they're talking about. But I will mention that I liked Konosuke and Matsumoto's characters,...

Assemble “We’re here,” Miki declares as the train slowly grinds to a halt. She tries to shake me awake. “Get up.” “I am up,” I say almost immediately, well-rested from all the sleep I’ve had during the trip on the train. I grab my bags and I readily go through the train’s doors as they slide open. I...

Cover your eyes, kids, things are gonna get lewd.

Seems like I lost my consistency. I apologize profusely for that. On the bright side, I'm still chugging along, albeit extremely slowly.

This chapter was made to be exclusively fluffy, so I apologize again if anyone wanted any actual plot development for the latest chapter.

Faster Than a Speeding Bullet http://i.imgur.com/sGTAAR1.png “Aren’t you excited?” Miki asks me, taking in a good long whiff of the cool, early morning air. “I can’t say that I am,” I reveal, yawning. “Come on, Hisao. It’s not every day a girl invites you to her home from all the way in the country...

I assume she enjoyed the game and will she do more or is it a one off deal? She'll do more. I've paid her for at least one more piece, and I'm planning on paying her for maybe two more in the future. Glad to see this is still making progress...and that artwork is absolutely stunning! Thanks, man! I...

Hesmiyu wrote:Sugoi!

That must have taken a while to do by the looks of it. Also, are they a fan of the game?

It took her around 3 or 4 days, I suppose. And she's never ever heard of the game. Having her draw this for me was a good opportunity to introduce her.

Lore, if you're reading this, hi! <3

I'm back. Well, sorta. The next chapter will be up soon, hopefully. In the meantime, I had a good friend of mine work up an art commission for Dancing, and man does it look amazing. http://i.imgur.com/a1ER6SR.jpg Other than that, there really isn't much to look forward to except for a chapter in the...

It's nice to be back.

I know I haven't been very diligent with pumping out new chapters, and that's really unfortunate. Life hasn't been very agreeable with me lately, but hey. At least I'm still working on something. Better late than never, I guess.

Detective Comics “We don’t talk about Shanghai,” Miki declares, her fierce voice intoning the finality of her statement. “Oh come on, it wouldn’t hurt to try and see if it’s any good there,” I reason with her. “No means no, Hisao. What part of that don’t you get?” She growls again. “Shh, you two, I...

I imagine the very slight differences between the two choices are gonna make an effect later, correct? Otherwise, not sure what the point was. That's the initial plan, yes. A few instances of past tense slipping in here and there, nothing else to criticize... ...except for the choice point. I think...