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by acquireTigris
Fri Aug 03, 2018 10:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

Apologies for taking forever to update. I've been dealing with some pretty heavy stuff recently, including suicidal depression. I'm getting better though.

I can't guarantee any updates soon, but I'm not letting go of this project either, so hopefully I'll do something soon. Maybe.
by acquireTigris
Fri Aug 04, 2017 6:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

If it's supposed to be a timeskip it should be set apart from the rest of the story (not only at the beginning but also at the end of the time skip). You certainly cannot skip back to present tense within the same paragraph like you did. In this case it's not really necessary to make it a time skip...
by acquireTigris
Wed Aug 02, 2017 3:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

The station wasn’t even surrounded by four solid walls, only railings and columns. Climbing out of the driver’s seat was the shortest, burliest man I’ve ever seen. Although the first two were honest mistakes, the last one was deliberately put into past tense because Hisao's recalling what happened ...
by acquireTigris
Mon Jul 31, 2017 9:29 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)

Woohoo! A new chapter! ( And this story isn't dead! ) As much as I'd like to give you some useful comments/feedback, I'm horrible at that kind of stuff and I'll leave it to people who will actually know what they're talking about. But I will mention that I liked Konosuke and Matsumoto's characters,...
by acquireTigris
Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Assemble

Assemble “We’re here,” Miki declares as the train slowly grinds to a halt. She tries to shake me awake. “Get up.” “I am up,” I say almost immediately, well-rested from all the sleep I’ve had during the trip on the train. I grab my bags and I readily go through the train’s doors as they slide open. I...
by acquireTigris
Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 2/20)

Cover your eyes, kids, things are gonna get lewd.
by acquireTigris
Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 2/20)

Seems like I lost my consistency. I apologize profusely for that. On the bright side, I'm still chugging along, albeit extremely slowly.

This chapter was made to be exclusively fluffy, so I apologize again if anyone wanted any actual plot development for the latest chapter.
by acquireTigris
Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Faster Than a Speeding Bullet

Faster Than a Speeding Bullet http://i.imgur.com/sGTAAR1.png “Aren’t you excited?” Miki asks me, taking in a good long whiff of the cool, early morning air. “I can’t say that I am,” I reveal, yawning. “Come on, Hisao. It’s not every day a girl invites you to her home from all the way in the country...
by acquireTigris
Thu Nov 03, 2016 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (New art 11/1)

I assume she enjoyed the game and will she do more or is it a one off deal? She'll do more. I've paid her for at least one more piece, and I'm planning on paying her for maybe two more in the future. Glad to see this is still making progress...and that artwork is absolutely stunning! Thanks, man! I...
by acquireTigris
Tue Nov 01, 2016 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (New art 11/1)

Hesmiyu wrote:Sugoi!

That must have taken a while to do by the looks of it. Also, are they a fan of the game?
It took her around 3 or 4 days, I suppose. And she's never ever heard of the game. Having her draw this for me was a good opportunity to introduce her.

Lore, if you're reading this, hi! <3
by acquireTigris
Tue Nov 01, 2016 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 6/8)

I'm back. Well, sorta. The next chapter will be up soon, hopefully. In the meantime, I had a good friend of mine work up an art commission for Dancing, and man does it look amazing. http://i.imgur.com/a1ER6SR.jpg Other than that, there really isn't much to look forward to except for a chapter in the...
by acquireTigris
Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 6/8)

It's nice to be back.

I know I haven't been very diligent with pumping out new chapters, and that's really unfortunate. Life hasn't been very agreeable with me lately, but hey. At least I'm still working on something. Better late than never, I guess.
by acquireTigris
Wed Jun 08, 2016 12:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Detective Comics

Detective Comics “We don’t talk about Shanghai,” Miki declares, her fierce voice intoning the finality of her statement. “Oh come on, it wouldn’t hurt to try and see if it’s any good there,” I reason with her. “No means no, Hisao. What part of that don’t you get?” She growls again. “Shh, you two, I...
by acquireTigris
Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (Update 7/30/17)
Replies: 227
Views: 68080

Re: Dancing: A Miki pseudo-route (updated 11/20)

I imagine the very slight differences between the two choices are gonna make an effect later, correct? Otherwise, not sure what the point was. That's the initial plan, yes. A few instances of past tense slipping in here and there, nothing else to criticize... ...except for the choice point. I think...