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by coolpool2
Thu Nov 13, 2014 10:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 34704

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Very enjoyable to read, I like all the new characters and semi-depressed Hisao.
by coolpool2
Thu Nov 06, 2014 11:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 34704

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated: 11/

Very nice writing, I really enjoyed reading it. I like how you guys aren't just ignoring the main five girls or something like that.
by coolpool2
Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route [Updated 10/2/15]
Replies: 150
Views: 34704

Re: Universal Gravitation: An Aoi Pseudo-Route

I'm really liking the first chapter, I'm not very good at giving writing advice but I am excited to see what you two will do with this in the future.