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by GodlyVirus
Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

Hey hey! I'm back after speaking French. though to be fair I was never gone because I was using a differ... I mean, I was a lurker. Yes... A lurker... A lurker who put up with Creepypasta's editing format for a grand total of 2 minutes to write his story... So what was the lesson or even basic impor...
by GodlyVirus
Fri May 30, 2014 4:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 31128

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series

After reading this, ( I haven't read the rest of your works) I feel like I'm not suppose to be reading this yet and I picked up some kind of sequel... I think. It's that kind of thing where you go to the libary, see a cool book, check it out and start reading it. Then around page 150 you get the sen...
by GodlyVirus
Fri May 30, 2014 2:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 34035

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5

Ne pouvait pas faire valoir qu'une langue est de forme d'art possède son propre ? Toutes les langues ont beaucoup de choses que l'on peut exprimer pas la même façon, donc en limitant les langues vous êtes également limiter le route les gens peuvent s'exprimer.
by GodlyVirus
Wed May 28, 2014 5:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

Drug Abuse, what???
by GodlyVirus
Wed May 28, 2014 1:40 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

Ahhh man... now I have to take out the Mahou Shoujo scence... now I'm all kinds of depressed... no... I'll leave it in... it doesn't make sense even if you know what he's saying. *Accomplished Fan Fiction Writer*
by GodlyVirus
Wed May 28, 2014 3:08 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

hey quick question, are you guys catching all these refernces? Like, because after I just stared at my Dora the Expoloer refernce for seconds... minutes... hours, I'm starting to question if anyone actually understands what's happening in the story. Let me know if I should tone them down
by GodlyVirus
Tue May 27, 2014 8:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

Mirage_GSM wrote:
But I know the typical traditon of a visual novel is to dedicate 4 chapters to each girl...
You're talking about "Acts" rather than chapters.
Close enough
by GodlyVirus
Tue May 27, 2014 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 34035

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5

Monsieur, j'ai à dire... vous avez le Français pire que j'aie jamais vu... JAMAIS... Je me suis retrouvé au moins de la moitié des choses que vous avez écrit à la recherche de google. Je reçois des Français n'est pas votre affaire, j'ai eu que quelques histoires il y a quand Potato a dit Je vais nag...
by GodlyVirus
Tue May 27, 2014 1:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

It should be noted when I say "Chapter" I mean "scene" chapter just sounds cooler to me. But I know the typical traditon of a visual novel is to dedicate 4 chapters to each girl... but these aren't chapters these are "I wrote all this shit down and now I'm finding segways that make sense" So yay for...
by GodlyVirus
Tue May 27, 2014 12:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Little More Like Yamaku
Replies: 12
Views: 2545

Re: A Little More Like Yamaku

This was actually pretty cool... as a conpect... I'm not sure if you ever seen someone get even get their hand cut off... but holy shit is there a lot of blood. getting two arms would be indefinitly fatal, there would too much blood loss in the first second... like even if were you hooked to a blood...
by GodlyVirus
Mon May 26, 2014 4:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel (We're on the third chapter now!)

His name is Tom, he's a rock...
by GodlyVirus
Mon May 26, 2014 2:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel (Second Chapter of Emiko route) (Most currientist)

Food... I want food... I roll around my bed, why? What does rolling do to help my situation? I don't know... I'm hungry, hunger makes people do strange things. I look at my food stash, hoping there's something good there, but there's nothing there. That can't be possible, no it can't be. No I got so...
by GodlyVirus
Thu Apr 24, 2014 8:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel

For those wondering, I do techinally have the next part ready, but I want to finsh the part after that so I can make sure if I slammed with extra homwork or whatever, I can make sure I have a part for the next month, at least. I don't have a schedule other than, "write a part in a month and post it"...
by GodlyVirus
Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel

Yeah... I'm a horrible editor and so is Word and also pretty much everything else on the internet that I can find. For refernce, I will reread my stories many times, and I fix MANY spelling errors, (oh my god so many,) and just in general any broken dialouge like sudden spikes in emotion for no othe...
by GodlyVirus
Sun Apr 20, 2014 12:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 5488

Re: Steel

Thank you for support dude! Though now I feel really pressured write everyone well, even though I planned most of this crap out, you know, like how you're suppose to. But I hope it at least does a somewhat decent job of story telling.. ing.