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by brythain
Tue Sep 17, 2019 2:32 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Out Of The Blue" (Neko Book 4) *ABANDONED* Summary posted.
Replies: 360
Views: 65043

Re: "Out Of The Blue" (Neko Book 4) *ABANDONED* Summary posted.

It's the end of an era! Thanks for the closure. You're right that art is never completed, only abandoned.
by brythain
Tue Sep 10, 2019 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 57
Views: 3692

Re: Time is Dancing and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

Your mastery—of the form of writing you're using—is improving. One can linger over the sentences and paragraphs, because they are beautiful.
by brythain
Mon Sep 09, 2019 10:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8839

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

I've done a lot of short fics with incomplete build-up, but I think it's good practice to leave some clues if the set-up presented seems out of character. Lilly's never been the sort to dive into work at all; she seems better at getting other people to do the work. Hisao at this point should be awar...
by brythain
Fri Sep 06, 2019 10:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8839

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)

Scroff wrote:
Fri Sep 06, 2019 2:37 pm
"I've hardly seen you today. I hardly see you any day."
Lilly's obvious rejoinder shall remain unsaid. But there's a kind of out-of-character feel about this fic, although it is intense.
by brythain
Thu Aug 29, 2019 7:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Kintsugi Club and Other Stories [08/28/2019]
Replies: 57
Views: 3692

Re: Time is Dancing and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

That was a good read. Apart from it being about Lelouch (whom I've never felt belonged in there despite his cameo in the class background photo), it was a lovely piece of psychological development and melancholic prose—and some poetry. Thanks!
by brythain
Thu Aug 15, 2019 11:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')
Replies: 272
Views: 77951

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')

I'm honoured to be the effective cause of so many manly tears. I can only say that I had good material to work from and with. :)
by brythain
Mon Aug 12, 2019 12:42 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-09-06)
Replies: 120
Views: 8839

Re: Yet another one-shot thread (updated 2019-08-12)

Aha, that was FUN. The Emi pirate trope is canon, but you've run away with it into utter hilarity.
by brythain
Sun Aug 11, 2019 10:28 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Aug 11th, 2019: The Longest Road)
Replies: 58
Views: 4846

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Aug 11th, 2019: The Longest Road)

That is a good Yuuko story. There's a lot of extra 'telling rather than showing' though, compared to your usual output. Other than that, very nice.

For example:
“No no, it’s okay, it’s okay!” Yuuko frantically tried to assuage Hisao's concern.
by brythain
Sun Aug 11, 2019 1:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')
Replies: 272
Views: 77951

Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#59—'Smoke Gets In Your Eyes')

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this ...
by brythain
Thu Jul 25, 2019 2:52 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1886

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

Hanako Fancopter wrote:
Wed Jul 24, 2019 11:31 pm
Sort of just waiting until I feel like putting a bow on it.
Hanako Fancopter—His Last Bow. :D
by brythain
Wed Jul 24, 2019 10:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Riposte (Rika Story) (Completed)
Replies: 41
Views: 1886

Re: Riposte (Rika Story) (Updated 7-12-19)

On a narrative level, Hisao is describing his instantaneous reflections when he thinks about the fact that he's spending an evening with Kenji.

On a metanarrative level, this signals you're out of choices, having decided to not make choices throughout.
by brythain
Tue Jul 23, 2019 10:32 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Sands of Time
Replies: 7
Views: 364

Re: The Sands of Time

Aha, that's a wonderful bout of 'subverting the tropes'. And a salt-and-pepper mass media Nakai. :D Only one thing that made me reflexively wince: "The staffed wanted a quick write-up on your visit." Other than that, the title seems to promise more, and such, should it appear, would of course be int...
by brythain
Thu Jul 11, 2019 8:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Sgt. Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band (Oneshot thread)
Replies: 43
Views: 1460

Re: Shizune's Guide to Board Games as a Negotiation Tool

Mirage_GSM wrote:
Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:25 pm
Well, that was fun.
And I think it is one of the VERY few stories pairing Shizune and Kenji :-)
Are you mocking me?! I wrote some of those stories! :D
by brythain
Tue Jul 09, 2019 4:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NEW Fanfiction Available!
Replies: 2
Views: 298

Re: NEW Fanfiction Available!

Why not post them here? Many of us don't like clicking on external links.
by brythain
Tue Jul 09, 2019 4:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: to mirage
Replies: 7
Views: 424

Re: to mirage

NuclearStudent wrote:
Tue Jul 09, 2019 4:08 am
goddammit I regret this
You could always delete it. :D