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It's the end of an era! Thanks for the closure. You're right that art is never completed, only abandoned.

Your mastery—of the form of writing you're using—is improving. One can linger over the sentences and paragraphs, because they are beautiful.

I've done a lot of short fics with incomplete build-up, but I think it's good practice to leave some clues if the set-up presented seems out of character. Lilly's never been the sort to dive into work at all; she seems better at getting other people to do the work. Hisao at this point should be awar...

Scroff wrote: ↑

Fri Sep 06, 2019 2:37 pm

"I've hardly seen you today. I hardly see you any day."

Lilly's obvious rejoinder shall remain unsaid. But there's a kind of out-of-character feel about this fic, although it is intense.

That was a good read. Apart from it being about Lelouch (whom I've never felt belonged in there despite his cameo in the class background photo), it was a lovely piece of psychological development and melancholic prose—and some poetry. Thanks!

I'm honoured to be the effective cause of so many manly tears. I can only say that I had good material to work from and with.

Aha, that was FUN. The Emi pirate trope is canon, but you've run away with it into utter hilarity.

That is a good Yuuko story. There's a lot of extra 'telling rather than showing' though, compared to your usual output. Other than that, very nice.

For example:

“No no, it’s okay, it’s okay!” Yuuko frantically tried to assuage Hisao's concern.

The following post was written in response to Stiles Long's writing contest. Each participant was given a list of KS character pairings and a list of locations. One of each was chosen for this fic. There were a limited set of options available to participants in the contest and it may be that this ...

Hanako Fancopter wrote: ↑

Wed Jul 24, 2019 11:31 pm

Sort of just waiting until I feel like putting a bow on it.

Hanako Fancopter—His Last Bow.

On a narrative level, Hisao is describing his instantaneous reflections when he thinks about the fact that he's spending an evening with Kenji.

On a metanarrative level, this signals you're out of choices, having decided to not make choices throughout.

Aha, that's a wonderful bout of 'subverting the tropes'. And a salt-and-pepper mass media Nakai. :D Only one thing that made me reflexively wince: "The staffed wanted a quick write-up on your visit." Other than that, the title seems to promise more, and such, should it appear, would of course be int...

Mirage_GSM wrote: ↑

Mon Jul 08, 2019 12:25 pm

Well, that was fun.
And I think it is one of the VERY few stories pairing Shizune and Kenji

Are you mocking me?! I wrote some of those stories!

Why not post them here? Many of us don't like clicking on external links.

NuclearStudent wrote: ↑

Tue Jul 09, 2019 4:08 am

goddammit I regret this

You could always delete it.