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My dear Mirage! This is excellent. I loved the chronological vignette format, which told many bits of story—about Nurse, Nomiya, and others—while keeping the main storyline flowing. I had no idea what I'd get, and am indeed very pleased with my present. I am now fearful that I am not going to delive...

Great update. I see Act 4 on the horizon, judging from the bottom line of that update. That brings me mysterious joy too.

Okay, there's a major problem right there. You've combined a lot of other people's work without attribution. This isn't a good idea, and it's a bit disrespectful to the people whose works you've compiled.

Started vanilla, ended strawberry cotton candy.

There aren't many Jigoro stories. This one was a good addition to headcanon. It made me suspect that Jigoro overcompensated, then learnt to use his overcompensation personality as a joke—one which he later inflicted on Hisao and many others.

Just caught up. Jigoro/Hiroyushi story: highlight was Lilly, who I suddenly could not help but visualise as Chibi Lilly, round and dumpling-like, forever bumping into things while newly-adolescent Akira rolls her eyeballs. Miki/Hisao story: a true booby prize, with gold/silver/bronze medallists appa...

Silentcook wrote: ↑

Sun Oct 21, 2018 6:38 pm

It's not definite, but it could be. Try looking up "garlic eaters". The rest is left as an exercise for the reader.

He also eats a lot of pizza and steals books from the library. Definitely some Italian influence there.

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Much appreciated, fun to read!

So far so good for this story, but you need to find an editor because you're not doing punctuation, and you tend to let words run on so that it's hard to understand your lines. We're not going away, we're not in a hurry to see what you do next, but we do appreciate effort to make it easier for us to...

I'm starting to think this discussion about floor numbers learns toward derailment... More to the point, there are literally hundreds of possible ways to assign room numbers. You mention the floor below Hisao's having a leading 0 as both a possibility and an impossibility, but I addressed that oddi...

Leaty wrote: ↑

Wed Sep 19, 2018 6:52 pm

Uhhh... I get that most people probably haven't read my fic recently enough to be totally aware of this, but this is immensely derivative of my work.

That is true. I think of it as a cry in the wilderness seeking something more, but what that something is, Leaty, must remain Silent.

It's entertaining when the discussion on the story exceeds the story length. Means a learning point exists for everybody.

Ah. The best moment of my internet day, new material from ProfA.

Every time I see that name 'Angus', I think of beef burgers done medium rare.