Search found 3607 matches

by brythain
Thu Mar 06, 2014 2:29 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)
Replies: 204
Views: 78777

Re: Shizune Arc (misha, jigoro)

Well, that was a good response from my limited perspective, ProfA. The last few posts here have also provided a useful (if not painless) discussion in terms of what I've learnt about deafness. Thanks!
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) LillyArc (Complet

When Hisao dies suddenly, especially in that situation - just as they're about to greet a second child... Minor non-spoiler correction: Hisao dies about two years after the cardiac incident he suffered on the day his son Akira was born. The parenthetical (sorry!) chapter 'T' numbers are arranged ar...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:27 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

While you take a well-earned break, may I ask for a complete list of character arcs? So far we've had Shizune and Lilly. Hanako and Emi are still to come. Apparently you have a Misha one saved for last? Looking forward to that. Does Rin have an arc? I'm quite curious about her dissapearance. All si...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) LillyArc (Complet

Anyhow, I agree that it seems odd for Lilly to carry a torch for Hisao for 60+ years. As the story drew to a close, I found myself thinking it strange that she wouldn't recount any other experiences she's had other than the small, explicit vignettes we've seen. It seems cherry-picked. In the end, t...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) LillyArc (Complet

I must admit the "Emi dying of a broken heart"-thing came across to me as weird. It almost sounds like Emi lost her will to live after Hisao died, gave up and faded away. Emi's dealt with loss before. We also know how she deals with it...by running her artificial legs off and trudging on....
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) LillyArc (Complet

Hold up a second, just realized a factual issue. 2011-02-07, Lilly would have to decide whether she wanted to be a UK or Japanese citizen (she could have legitimately gotten dual citizenship by birth, but at the age of 22, Japan requires someone to either relinquish their Japanese citizenship or th...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

I admit to struggling with the idea of Lilly carrying a torch for Hisao for 60+ years, and moreso with Hisao's message to her on the plaque, but otherwise still very well done. *grin* I admit to struggling with that too. But by Lilly's neutral end, they've had quite the romance—and Lilly's a romant...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

Frankyo wrote:Geez... I wonder what happened to Emi, since Shizune had to adopt her kids...
Emi's arc doesn't end very well for anyone. That's why I'll need a break before I start writing it. Sigh. I'm beginning to think only Hanako gets a good deal in my mosaic…
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

AtD (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly7 (Complete)

This is the seventh and last part of Lilly's main arc in 'After the Dream'. There's a lot more to tell, but not here. It is also the logical ending to the entire Lilly story, including ' Testament ', whose last chapter concludes just before this. Lilly 7: Terminus (2074) It’s Tanabata again, and I ...
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

Re: After the Dream (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 2014030

Most of it will have to wait for Hanako's arc… I will be taking a break after Lilly's arc. Emi will be next. :)
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 48443

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S6 Update - 2/28/14)

I'm taking my time to enjoy this. Interesting premise, entertaining perspectives… I'm learning something here about writing too. :)
by brythain
Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

AtD (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly6 up 20140305

This is the sixth part of Lilly's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. There's a special guest-star (heh) at the end. This part also dovetails with Shizune's arc here . Lilly 6: Transpose (2030) It has been six years since I was last in Japan, for Hisao’s funeral. I remember ...
by brythain
Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 942709

Re: Yamaku Book Club

I've read this piece through for the first time. It comes across as rather unpolished, but it does tell a fascinating story with interesting insights as to the history and character of Shiina Mikado, our dear Misha. Characters: Misha grows well and comes to terms with herself, Will is a good bro, He...
by brythain
Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:31 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After the Dream—Lilly's Arc/'Testament' (Complete)
Replies: 112
Views: 139661

AtD (PostLilly NeutralEnd) Lilly5 up 20140305

This is the fifth part of Lilly's arc in 'After the Dream', my post-Lilly-neutral-end mosaic. It has slight overlap with Shizune's arc here . Lilly 5: Transmute (2028) I’m sitting here at my keyboard, trying to say things that almost cannot be said. Hanako wants me to do it; she says it will help. ...
by brythain
Tue Mar 04, 2014 10:26 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 379335

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -25/2/14

Five submissions… [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9474]After The Dream (Emi's Story)[/url][/b] – Epilogue by [b]brythain[/b] (complete, ca. 10000 words) [b]PoV: [/b]Emi; [b]Pairings: [/b]Hisao x Emi; [spoiler]Hideaki x Hanako[/spoiler]; [b]Begins: [/b]after Lilly's neutral ending...