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I finally got around to reading this, and aside from the fact that Kagami acts like my crazy ex sometimes, I'm loving it. I like the pacing. Not too much fluff but also not too little. Keep it up.

This struck home for me: being new and confused at a new school. You did a good job describing the feelings involved, and did well to capture Misha's character.

Keep writing things.

You've been given the honor of being the subject of my first post. Congratulations. :mrgreen: From what I know, Saki is supposed to be a somewhat complex character and I think you've already nailed it on the head. It might be too early to really say anything, but what little you've got right here is...